hese are using AP style grammar and rules. Col. Tom Parker, who was Elvis Presley's Manager, had control over the singers' professional, private and personal life. - The comma after manager should be dele
There was not a communications/journalism section so I thought marketing was closest. I need help with a few questions. For some of these I feel like there are multiple answers. I've been trying to figure these out for hours. Keep in mind that my professor is extremely illusive and the seemingly obvious answer choice usually isn't the correct answer. These are using AP style grammar and rules.
Col. Tom Parker, who was Elvis Presley's Manager, had control over the singers' professional, private and personal life.
- The comma after manager should be deleted.
- A comma should be inserted after private
- singers' should be changed to singer's
A number of animals are further down the road and cannot be returned.
- cannot should be changed to can not
- are should be changed to is
- further should be changed to farther
The team denied it was bias against the coach.
- bias should be changed to biased
- it was should be changed to they were
- The sentence is correct as written.
The mayor's delegation, as well as the Chamber of Commerce members, was aware that the final hours of the legislative session is usually chaotic.
- is should be changed to are
- The comma after members should be deleted.
- was should be changed to were
The effect of technology on journalist is much more than it was 10 years ago.
- effect should be changed to affect
- journalist should be changed to journalists
- than should be changed to then

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