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After reviewing my feedback that I received on my Unit 6 Assignment, I clearly need to go to the drawing board with my sources again. Some of my sources were not accurate and I did not explain my supporting evidence enough. I also need to tweak my thesis statement to include the solution that I have come up with, as this is an important part of the thesis statement. The feedback that I received was constructive in showing me that there are some things that I need to change before getting my draft
of my essay submitted. It is important to nail out the small little things that I am getting critiqued on so that I can ensure that my essay is the best version that it can be. In some of the resource descriptions that I used; I did not cite them in the passage using an in-text citation which resulted in a low grade. To fix this, it is important to include in text citations for anything that I am utilizing within my writing. It was a mistake on my part however, it is not one that is impossible to fix. It is relatively an easy tweak to make to better my essay.
