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Rewrite the following statements to make the thesis clearer.
1. The government should care about mental health.
The government must invest to improve medical service about mental health
in teens
2. The TLC provides great resources for understanding how to
use commas.
The TLC is a great resource that helps us in understanding how and where to
use commas.
3. Patients like nurses when they are nice.
Patients feels better when a nurse is gentle and friendly, and this helps in the
recovery
4. Dragons can be scary when they breathe fire.
Dragons are frightening because they are big and dangerous when they
breathe fire at children reading books.
Read the following 3 paragraphs. Write a topic sentence for each paragraph.
When you have completed the topic sentences, write a thesis statement that
would be appropriate for an essay on the same topic.
People with good attitudes tend to be more effective problem solvers,
and team players are the types of people most employers are looking
for. Being able to see the positive side of a negative situation is a
valuable character trait in the workplace.
Positive thinking contributes
to more productivity and workplace harmony, whereas someone who is
negative and complains a lot could affect others with their negativity
and result in less productivity in the workplace, which is why most
employers steer clear of pessimists.
Employees who have positive thinking are more productive in a work
environment, and this is the type of workers the business is looking for.
Nothing is more frustrating to an employer than someone who cuts
corners or leaves work incomplete.
Employers want to hire people who
are not just positive about doing work but are willing to put in a bit of
extra effort to get the work done. If you can show an employer that
you are willing to break a sweat to get a job done, they will take you
more seriously as a capable candidate for the position you are applying
for.
Business is more successful if employees have a positive attitude and put
more effort into their work, and employers want to hire this type of people.
Passion and willingness to work hard can only offer a prospective
employer so much. Unless you can show how your experiences have
helped prepare you for the position you are interviewing for, t
he
employers may decide to go with a candidate who has completed the
appropriate training already. It is costly and time-consuming to train a
new employee, which may make many employers hesitate before
hiring less qualified applicants.
Employers decide to hire people that complete the appropriate training
already.
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