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BSBMKG555-Write persuasive copy
Term 1 / 2022
Assessment 2
Piyaphon Wisutthichon
Student ID: BBI001155
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Assessment Task 2 -Project Project
This assessment task requires you to interpret a creative brief and evaluate a range of innovative
options to write persuasive copy. This includes:
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Reviewing the creative brief and understanding the client’s requirements ●
Creating a website ad copy that: ○
Aligns with the task requirements stipulated in the creative brief. ○
Complies with the organisation’s copywriting policy and procedures. ○
Complies with the ethical and legislative requirements. To do so, the student will be required to complete the following activities: ●
Activity 1: Establish the content purpose
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Activity 2: Prepare persuasive content according to the creative brief
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Activity 3: Finalise persuasive content and seek approval BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Case study Introduction
Creative Digitex is a marketing company specialising in marketing, branding, interactive solutions, and
visual communication across various platforms.
Its staff oversees marketing projects from conception to
completion, from ideation to digital strategy through UX, website design, and development.
The organisation further writes persuasive content in the following forms based on the creative brief
provided.
Digital o
Magazine articles o
Website advertisements o
Blogs o
Videos o
E-books o
Brochures
Audio The organisation have existing policies and procedures relating to copyright that each content designer,
content writer or copywriter must comply with. Policies and procedures relating to copyright
Overview Copyright refers to the owner’s exclusive rights to publish, copy, adapt, broadcast, and perform
content found in literary, dramatic, musical, and creative works, as well as computer software, sound
recordings, films, and broadcasts.
According to the Copyright Act, the owner is usually the author or creator of the copyrighted material,
although it can also be another person or legal body. The organisation’s policy on Intellectual Property
addresses copyright ownership issues.
There are some exceptions to the prohibition on using another’s copyright. The owner may permit or
licence another to exercise the copyright, or the law may allow some copyright exercise, either for
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free or in exchange for equitable payment to the copyright owner.
This article aims to provide broad guidelines on the types of copying that can be done legally within
the company.
Policy
The organisation must comply with the terms of the Copyright Act 1968 and any relevant copyright
agreement(s) currently in effect when copying copyright material.
Legislative Requirements
The Copyright Act of 1968 governs the organisation’s activities.
Infringement of Copyright
It is explicitly banned to use organisation equipment, facilities, and/or premises for a purpose that
infringes on copyright. Under the Copyright Act, everyone who commits such an infringement is
personally accountable. The organisation may also be found liable.
Use of Copyright without Infringement
Voluntary Licence
The copyright owner may freely or under licence authorise another to use one or more of the
exclusive rights. These licences should be strictly followed; for example, a computing software licence
may be limited to a specific site, person, machine, or purpose.
For copywriters:
When writing web ad copy, keep in mind any legal or ethical limits.
Be aware of legislation and legislative instruments that are relevant to the copywriting
process, both directly and indirectly;
Before beginning the design process, write down these limitations, including their most
important stipulations.
Demonstrate strong corporate citizenship throughout the copywriting process’ lifespan.
Ethical considerations
Ethical Requirements
Explanation Advocacy Only objective and neutral information should be included in the copy.
Decent content
The content is designed to sell a skincare product that people are more
likely to use.
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Subliminal promotion
There should be no hidden signals in the copy that cause people to
consume things irrationally.
Appropriate language
Insulting and abusive language that makes people feel resentful or
embarrassed should not be used in the copy.
Honesty When describing the benefits, the copy should be accurate and truthful.
Legislative requirements Legislations/standards Key provisions - Age discrimination act 2004
- Disability discrimination Act
1992
- Racial discrimination act 1975
- Sex discrimination act 1984
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Australian
Human
Rights
Commission Act 1986
Age, disability, race, colour, nation, descent, ethnic origin,
immigration status, religion, beliefs, cultural background, gender,
sexual orientation, intersex status, marital or relationship status
should not be included in a content writer’s copy.
Copyright Act 1988
Text, artistic work, databases, journals, music, computer
programs, media broadcasts, and other types of creative works
may be referred to as assets in a copy.
Broadcasting Services Act 1992
The following are some of the key objectives of this Act:
Protecting children from improper online content;
Broadcasting content that is detrimental to children
through any media channel.
Organisational policies and procedures and style guide Organisational policies and procedures and style guide The organisation requires that complex documents are presented in a clear, concise, and consistent
manner.
When preparing any complex document, you must follow the guidelines in this style guide for
shortened forms, capitals, hyphens, punctuation, en rules, bullets, quotations, and italics. These
guidelines apply whether your target audience is internal or external and whether your output is hard-
copy or electronic.
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Document purpose Before starting to write, it is useful to ask yourself: ●
To whom am I writing?
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How much information do they need to know?
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What information must be conveyed?
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What medium will best meet the needs of the audience?
Using plain English Techniques that will help you to communicate in plain English include: ●
Writing in short sentences with no more than two printed lines
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Arranging your documents so that the most important information comes first, followed by the details ●
Always thinking about your readers and tailoring your writing to their needs rather than your own
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Using short, familiar words where they match your meaning, rather than adorning text with long words to sound impressive
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Utilising the same language as you would in a personal letter
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Paying equal attention to design and layout as well as language
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Writing in the active voice entails putting the agent of the action before the action (for example, ‘we do it,’ rather than ‘it is done by us’).
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Utilising a large number of first and second-person pronouns (I, we, you), particularly in letters or reports
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Avoiding the use of unnecessary capital letters
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Avoiding archaic words such as ‘heretofore,’ ‘herein,’ and ‘aforementioned.’
Avoid jargon
Jargon is a technical or specialist language unique to a profession or group that is understood by
those on the inside but is often incomprehensible or meaningless to outsiders.
It can take many forms, such as acronyms like ‘RUN,’ ‘EFTSL,’ or ‘AB,’ unfamiliar phrases like
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If you cannot avoid terms that are likely to be unfamiliar to your audience, clearly explain to them
when they are first used or list them in a glossary for a report or add them to the Definitions
Dictionary in the case of a policy or procedure.
Use non-discriminatory (inclusive) language Individuals and groups can be discriminated against based on their gender, race or ethnic origin,
physical or intellectual disability, sexual preference, or age. To avoid discriminatory expressions,
rewriting or recasting a sentence may be a better solution than substituting words.
Consider tables and charts Tables are used to display numerical data that would be difficult to comprehend if presented solely in words. Good images help to communicate your thoughts by adding immediacy, focusing attention,
stimulating interest, and saving words. The use of graphics should aid the audience in comprehending
your message. A chart usually has one of two functions: it provides a specific example of a general
idea being explored in the text or summarises a body of information being discussed in the text.
Graphics should never be an afterthought when it comes to writing; instead, plan ahead to utilise
them properly. Make sure that your text and graphics go well together. It’s a waste of time to
duplicate information in text, images, and tables.
Tables and figures should be numbered and labelled, and they should be referred to by their numbers.
Use the following convention to place a table title before the table and a figure title after the figure: ●
Table 1: (bold text, before table) ●
Figure 1: (bold text, after figure) To improve accessibility by the vision impaired, all graphics should be labelled with “alternative text.”
For instructions on how to achieve this, see ‘Instructions for Writing a Policy.’
Spelling
Policy and procedure documents are to be written in Australian English. The Macquarie Dictionary
should be used to check the spelling.
Common errors include using the letter ‘z’ instead of the letter ‘s’, for example, in an organisation and
deleting the letter ‘u’ in words that end in ‘our’ such as neighbour and colour.
Font
Size 10 black Verdana font is required for policy and procedure documents.
Size 8 black Verdana Templates will offer you the perfect size for headers and other elements.
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Style guide
Purpose of the style guides The purpose of the style guides is to help the employees to prepare the organisation’s documentation
consistent with the corporate organisational style. The below-given style guides apply to the following documents: ●
Company procedures ●
Safety checklists
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Advertisement document Writing style
The writing style should be concise, professional and visually appealing. Hyperlinks
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Use title hyperlink before inserting the hyperlink. ●
The web hyperlinks should be accurate. ●
Each hyperlink must initiate with http://……
Page margins: ●
Left margin: 2.4 cm ●
Right margin: 2.4 cm
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Header and footer: 1.25 cm Line spacing
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1.15
Paragraph
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Include spacing after paragraph Layout: Bullets
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First level indent-left: 0.64 cm ●
Second level indent-left: 1.91 cm ●
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Spacing after: 8pt
Style attributes
Style
Font
Size
Characteristics
Bullet Verdana 10
Normal
Numbering Verdana
10
Normal
Header and Footer Verdana
7
Normal
Table text Verdana
10
Normal Title Verdana
18
Bold, Uppercase
Heading 1
Verdana
13
Bold, Italic
Heading 2
Verdana
11
Bold, Italic Graphic, diagram and
table captions
Verdana
10
Underlined, Italic
Borders: ●
All table outlines should be black and bold. ●
Inner border lines should be grey.
New project
Creative Digitex has received a new project to develop a website ad copy for Shoe Universe’s
advertising marketing campaign. The purpose of producing a website ad copy that will help the
organisation communicate its brand message effectively. The creative brief for the writing the
persuasive copy is given below: Creative brief: Shoe Universe
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Brand statement ‘Shoe Universe’ is a lifestyle brand that sells shoes, eyewear, clothing and watches for both men and
women. Campaign context and background Shoe Universe’ history is focused on developing comfortable and lightweight shoes. The organisation
strives to evolve Shoe Universe renowned comfort by bringing the most advanced technologies
available in footwear today. The organisation wants to launch an advertising marketing campaign. The advertising marketing
campaign will attract customers by discussing the key characteristics of shoes, i.e., comfort and style.
Target market Males and females between the age group 30-50 years prefer comfort and style. People wearing
these shoes should need to feel natural, relaxed, authentic, with a young spirit and healthy. Advertising objective A new campaign to increase brand awareness and demand for Shoe Universe shoes. Customer message Shoes made for your comfort and lifestyle. Key customer benefits Provides comfort and style that touches the lives and imaginations. Benefit support
Shoe Universe strives to provide comfortable shoes that provide relaxation.
Soft-foam footbed with contoured arch to provide better grip and elegant designs.
Focus on environmental sustainability. Competitors Allencooper, Nike, Asics, Puma, Addidas and others. Advertising tone BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Trustworthy, comfortable, durable, innovative, modern. Advertising medium Magazines advertisements and social network advertisements. Mandatory elements
Read product image
Attention drawing text or taglines
Values and benefits Budget and timelines Task: Copywriting process
Hourly Rate: 50/hour
Estimated Duration: One month
Estimated cost: $1000
Your role and responsibilities You are working as a content writer in Creative Digitex. As part of your job role, you are required to
interpret a creative brief and evaluate a range of innovative options to write persuasive copy. This
includes:
Determine the creative brief’s objectives, timelines, and budget.
Evaluate and choose writing styles based on the creative brief
Assess design and copy possibilities in light of the creative brief
Choose one or more options for presenting required information and visuals within the constraints of time and price.
Create persuasive content in accordance with the creative brief.
Seek feedback from relevant stakeholders.
Evaluate feedback and create persuasive material towards the end
Before releasing persuasive content, get approval from relevant personnel.
Task requirements In the simulated environment set by your training organisation, you will complete a set of activities to
create a persuasive digital copy for
the Creative brief considering the requirements given in the creative
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Task requirements include:
Reviewing the creative brief and understanding the client’s requirements
Creating a website ad copy that: o
Aligns with the task requirements stipulated in the creative brief. o
Complies with the organisation’s copywriting policy and procedures. o
Complies with the ethical and legislative requirements. BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Project:
This assessment task requires you to interpret a creative brief and evaluate a range of innovative
options to write persuasive copy. This includes:
●
Reviewing the creative brief and understanding the client’s requirements ●
Creating a website ad copy that: ○
Aligns with the task requirements stipulated in the creative brief. ○
Complies with the organisation’s copywriting policy and procedures. ○
Complies with the ethical and legislative requirements. To do so, the student will be required to complete the following activities: ●
Activity 1: Establish the content purpose
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Activity 2: Prepare persuasive content according to the creative brief
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Activity 3: Finalise persuasive content and seek approval Note:
The trainer/assessor will take on the role of Supervisor or assign a staff member in the role of
Marketing Manager.
Each student will be assessed individually for all assessment activities. Roles and responsibilities: Supervisor: The Supervisor will:
Assist you in understanding the task requirements
Provide you information about job roles and responsibilities
Supervise you completing the assessment task and requirements
Timeframe to complete the project: Two weeks (You have two weeks to complete the project): Changes to be made by the training
organisation)
Task requirements
You will be assessed on your technical knowledge and skills to complete this project.
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You will be assessed on working in a team environment and meeting your job role and
responsibilities.
You must follow the instructions provided by the trainer/assessor.
The task must be completed in the specified timeframe.
Your trainer/assessor will supervise and observe you completing the above activities. BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Activity 1: Establish the content purpose
This activity requires you to establish the content purpose for creating a website ad copy for Shoe
Universe. To do so, you are required to:
Follow the steps given below.
Complete the template/s associated with each step.
Submit the completed templates to the trainer/assessor. Step 1:
Identify the objectives, timelines, and budget of the persuasive content to be prepared in
digital format, i.e., website ad copy considering the creative brief provided.
Analyse the information given in the case study.
Determine the objectives, timelines, and budget considering the creative brief provided and
document the following using Template 1.
o
Date:
The day the task to be executed
o
Task:
Activity to be undertaken throughout the content writing process
o
Task objectives:
Objectives for preparation of the persuasive content o
Hourly Rate:
Hourly rate agreed
o
Estimated Duration:
Time estimated to complete a task
o
Estimated Cost:
Cost estimated to complete a task
Step 2:
Evaluate and choose writing styles based on the creative brief and document using Template 2.
Evaluate the information given in the case study.
Determine the following creative brief requirements and document using Template 2. o
Information requirements o
Format o
Language o
Writing style o
Level of details BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Template 1: Objectives, timelines, and budget of the persuasive content
Objectives, timelines, and budget of the persuasive content
Date:
1 March 2022
Task:
Reviewing the creative brief and understanding the client’s requirements
Task objectives:
The organisation requires that complex documents are presented in a clear,
concise, and consistent manner.
Hourly Rate:
$50
Estimated Duration:
2 Weeks
Estimated Cost:
$1000
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Template 2: : Evaluate and choose writing styles
Evaluate and choose writing styles (150 -200 )words Information requirements Creative Digitex has received a new project to develop a website ad copy for Shoe Universe’s
advertising marketing campaign. The purpose of producing a website ad copy that will help the
organisation communicate its brand message effectively.
Format Size 10 black Verdana font is required for policy and procedure documents.
Size 8 black Verdana Templates will offer you the perfect size for headers and other elements.
Language Use non-discriminatory (inclusive) language : Individuals and groups can be discriminated against
based on their gender, race or ethnic origin, physical or intellectual disability, sexual preference, or
age. To avoid discriminatory expressions, rewriting or recasting a sentence may be a better solution
than substituting words.
Writing style The writing style should be concise, professional and visually appealing. Level of details The following is a script for a 30 second video. Maximum word count is 150. Activity 2: Prepare persuasive content according to the creative brief
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This activity is a continuation of Activity 1.
This activity requires you to prepare persuasive content (website ad copy) according to the creative
brief for Shoe Universe. To do so, you are required to:
Follow the steps given below.
Complete the template/s associated with each step.
Submit the completed templates to the trainer/assessor. Step 1:
Assess design and copy options in light of the creative brief.
Analyse the information given in the creative brief and style guide.
Determine the design options. o
Conduct online research and determine two (2) designs that you can use to prepare the
website ad copy. o
Submit the designs to the trainer/assessor and request approval before preparing the
website ad copy.
Determine the content copy options from the creative brief that you would use to prepare the
website ad copy and document using Template 2. Step 2:
Choose one or more options for presenting required information and visuals within time and
price constraints.
Analyse the information given in the creative brief and style guide.
Determine two (2) options for communicating required information and images within time and
budgetary requirements.
Select the most suitable option for the final implementation considering the time and budgetary
requirements.
Document the following using Template 3. o
How the selected option for the final implementation help to communicate the required
information to the target audiences?
o
How the selected option for the final implementation meet the time and budgetary
requirements? Step 3:
Develop persuasive content (website ad copy) according to the creative brief. BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Follow the guidelines provided to prepare the content brief. o
The website ad copy should be prepared using online software such as Canva. o
The website ad copy must communicate the following:
Customer message
Key customer benefits
Benefit support o
The website ad copy must communicate must meet the following requirements:
Aligns with the task requirements stipulated in the creative brief.
Complies with the organisation’s copywriting policy and procedures.
Complies with the ethical and legislative requirements.
o
Proof the document twice and ensure accuracy of spelling and language used.
Submit the persuasive content (website ad copy) to the trainer/assessor.
Further, document the following using Template 4. o
How the persuasive content (website ad copy) prepared complies with the following
requirements?
Legal and ethical considerations
Creative brief BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Template 1: design and copy options
design and copy options (100 – 200 ) words
content copy options
The ad should include the Shoe Universe
logo, brand colors, and a snapshot of a show home.
Overlay music should be played over the script for the script.
The copy can be developed in the time required and within the budget required.
Before submitting the video script to the video company, it must be completed. Everything is within budget because the copywriting is done in-shoes.
Template 2: Options for presenting required information and visuals
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Options for presenting required information and visuals (100 – 200 ) words
How the selected option for the final implementation help to communicate the required
information to the target audiences?
The digital format will be including as follow: The Campaign key message “Brand awareness. Shoes made for your comfort and lifestyle.
The format of blog will be a green tone. Green is a restful and quiet color. Because it symbolizes nature, green is one of the most beautiful and comforting colors that attracts harmonious feelings that can diffuse anxiety and helps us stay calm and refreshed. Beige greens and pale yellow-greens are the most stress-reducing shades in the green family.
The format will including the picture of the best design and best quality of the color photography.
How the selected option for the final implementation meet the time and budgetary
requirements? Multimedia Video Ad on website : will be Audio and visual 15 seconds to 30 secouds video featuring photos of Shoe Universe’ and a male voice over BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Template 3: Develop persuasive content
Develop persuasive content (200 – 300 ) words
How the persuasive content (website ad copy) prepared complies with the following
requirements?
Legal and ethical considerations
The Competition and Consumer Act 2010, which incorporates the Australian Consumer Law, is the main legislation that ensures fair dealing in the marketplace. The application of
this Act will be to ensure that copy does not contain any deceptive language.
Ad Standards oversees several voluntary advertising standards (as well as a complaint process) in areas such as language, discriminatory depictions of people, concern for children, portrayals of violence, sex, sexuality, and nudity, and health and safety. The application of this standard will be to ensure that none of the concerns indicated above in the copy are present.
Text, artistic work, databases, journals, music, computer programs, media broadcasts, and
other types of creative works may be referred to as assets in a copy.
Creative brief
Shoe Universe’ history is focused on developing comfortable and lightweight shoes. The
organisation strives to evolve Shoe Universe renowned comfort by bringing the most
advanced technologies available in footwear today.
The organisation wants to launch an advertising marketing campaign. The advertising
marketing campaign will attract customers by discussing the key characteristics of shoes,
i.e., comfort and style.
Target market is
males and females between the age group 30-50 years prefer comfort
and style. People wearing these shoes should need to feel natural, relaxed, authentic, with
a young spirit and healthy.
The campaign's start date is two weeks away.
The budget for this project is $1,000. BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Activity 3: Finalise persuasive content and seek approval
This activity is a continuation of Activity 2. This activity requires you to finalise persuasive content prepared in Activity 2 and obtain required
approvals. To do so, you are required to:
Follow the steps given below.
Complete the template/s associated with each step.
Submit the completed templates to the trainer/assessor. Instructions for trainer/assessor:
The trainer/assessor will take on the role of the Supervisor.
The trainer/assessor will allocate the role of the client to a staff member.
The trainer/assessor must provide the college e-mail address of the staff member to the student.
The trainer/assessor must review the persuasive content e-mailed by the student and provide
feedback and suggest revisions to the website ad copy. Step 1: Consult with the following stakeholders for feedback.
Supervisor
Client Follow the guidelines provided below:
Proofread the website ad copy prepared in Activity 2.
E-mail the website ad copy (prepared in Activity 2) to the stakeholders. Follow the e-mail
guidelines provided. o
E-mail must include an appropriate subject. o
The body of the e-mail must:
Provide a summary of the website ad copy and its key features.
Request feedback on the design and content of the website ad copy. BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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o
The e-mail text must be formal and must be grammatically correct.
o
The e-mail must include the website ad copy as an attachment. Step 2:
Evaluate feedback and produce final persuasive content.
Evaluate feedback received from stakeholders in Step 1.
Make revisions to the website ad copy prepared in Activity 2.
Submit the revised persuasive content (website ad copy) to the trainer/assessor. Step 3:
Before releasing persuasive content, get approval from Supervisor (trainer/assessor)
Discuss the changes you have incorporated based on the feedback received.
Request approval for releasing the persuasive content (website ad copy). To: Marketing Manager
CC:
From: Piyaphon
Subject: final approval of persuasive contents Dear, sir or Madame
I am writing this letter to inform you about final approval of persuasive contents of Shoe Universe.
According to our discussion about persuasive contents we have update the finial daft of the persuasive contents. For the audio and digital format, we have developed the logo and the photo to be more professional to make the brand trusty. Please approved the daft for next step. final approval of persuasive contents.pdf
I am looking to hearing from you soon.
Best regards, Piyaphon
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To; Piyaphon
CC:
From: Marketing Manager
Subject: final approval of persuasive contents Dear Piyaphon,
The finalize persuasive contents over all is good enough but should add more detail such as the contact detail of the company and the photo need to be more attritive. Best regards, Marketing Manager
Feedback you received at the roundtable discussion In general, everyone agrees on the direction of persuasive copy. However, all agreed that there was still much to be fixed. The feedback is all very positive comments. Regarding the digital format, it is necessary to include some additional information in the image such as name, gmail or phone number to
contact the restaurant. There should be phrases like "Book now", "Call us" to increase effectiveness. The
audio version is better, people just want to add some conflicting information such as the restaurant failures that have been experienced to increase customer empathy and curiosity about existing success.
I consider revising based on everyone's suggestions. BSBFIN501 Unit Requirements V1
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Proofread both of documen
t
s, ensuring the following is checked
: Check List
Digital Format
Audio Format
Is the tone suitable?
Yes
Yes
Is it right for the audience?
Yes
Yes
Has it achieved its purpose?
Yes
Yes
Is the format c
orrect?
Yes
Yes
I
s the communication style
appropriate?
Yes
Yes
Does it have any grammatical
errors or spelling mistakes?
Yes
Yes
I
s the sentence and paragraph
construction clear?
Yes
Yes
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