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Covid-19 and Our Mental Health
Malachi Law
Liberty University
ENGL 101: Composition and Rhetoric
March 24, 2024
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Introduction
A.
Hook your audience (Relate it to the topic and your thesis argument.)
1. Like a stealthy intruder, Covid-19 penetrated not only bodies but also minds, leaving a trail of psychological distress in its wake. 2. “During pandemics, the number of people whose mental health is affected tends to be greater than the number of people affected by the infection” (Ornell et. Al, 2020 p. 232).
3. America witnessed a seismic shift in the landscape of mental health, revealing vulnerabilities and disparities previously obscured by the hustle and bustle of everyday life.
4. As we delve into the impact of Covid-19 on mental health in America, we uncover a narrative of resilience strained by isolation, economic upheaval, and shattered routines, echoing the urgency for comprehensive support and intervention. B. Identify the problem. (Give background/ context as appropriate for the topic and your audience.)
1. As the virus spread rapidly across the United States, it brought with a secondary crisis – a profound strain on the mental health of the nation’s populace.
2. Understanding the scope and severity of the mental health crisis induced by the pandemic C. Sate your thesis. (Makes a clear argument showing a cause-and-effect relationship.)
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1. The outbreak of Covid-19 in America precipitated a multifaced crisis in mental health, manifesting in heightened anxiety, depression, and other psychological disorders, primarily due to prolonged social isolation, economic instability, and the disruption of daily routines. II. Body Paragraphs (Many prefer for opposing viewpoints to be final body paragraph before the
conclusion; however, it can be included in any order in the body of the essay.)
A.
Topic Sentence: Directly supports the thesis argument and clearly identifies the topic of each individual body paragraph. (Your claim in the Toulmin essay)
1.
Prolonged social isolation emerged as a significant catalyst for the deterioration of
mental health during the Covid-19 pandemic, exacerbating feelings of loneliness and amplifying pre-existing psychological distress among individuals.
B.
Evidence: Example(s), fact(s), etc. from correctly cited quotes, paraphrases, and/or summaries that support your main point of the topic sentence. (Relating it to the thesis and providing additional information as needed.) 1.
According to research done by Transactions on Computational Social Systems (2022), during the pandemic the rates of major depressive episodes increased by 27.6% (p. 970).
C.
Analysis: Your explanation of how the evidence supports the topic sentence/ thesis statement: include examples of cause or effects. (Avoid using first and second person pronouns in your academic writing.)
1.
The evidence highlights the significant impact of prolonged social isolation on mental health, as evidenced by the substantial rise in rates of major depressive episodes during the Covid-19 pandemic.
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The enforced isolations measures, such as lockdowns and social distancing protocols, severed crucial social connections and deprived individuals of the social support networks vital for maintaining mental well-being. D.
Qualifier- The qualifier demonstrates limits to the argument or shows that it is now always true in all situations:
1.
While the research cited provides compelling evidence of the correlation between prolonged social isolation and increased rates of major depressive episodes during the pandemic, it is essential to acknowledge that individual experiences may vary. 2.
Cultural differences and coping mechanisms may influence individuals’ responses to isolation measures, suggesting that the relationship between social isolation and mental health outcomes is nuanced and context dependent.
E.
Rebuttal – Address counterclaims and how they may be addressed within the scope of your argument:
1.
Counterclaims may argue that virtual communication tools and online social interactions have mitigated the negative impact of social isolation during the pandemic. 2.
However, according to the International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health (Guo et. Al, 2020), “Increased mental health problems were
also associated with more intense exposure through the media” (p. 15).
3.
Moreover, disparities in access to technology and digital literacy may exacerbate feelings of exclusion among marginalized communities.
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F.
Summative Sentence: Restates the topic sentence in a new way and transitions your ideas from one paragraph to the next. (Use appropriate transitional words and sentences throughout your essay to help your essay flow well for your reader.)
1.
The surge in major depressive episodes during the pandemic underscores the profound toll of prolonged social isolation on mental health, emphasizing the imperative for comprehensive interventions to address the multifaced challenges facing individuals in navigating the psychological repercussions of Covid-19.
IV. Body Paragraphs. (Many prefer for opposing viewpoints to be final body paragraph before the conclusion; however, it can be included in any order in the body of the essay.)
A. Topic Sentence: Directly supports the thesis argument and clearly identifies the topic of each individual body paragraph. 1.
Economic instability resulting from the Covid-19 pandemic has emerged as a significant contributor to heightened anxiety and stress levels among individuals, exacerbating mental health challenges across America. B. Evidence: Example(s), fact(s), etc. from correctly cited quotes, paraphrases, and/or summaries that support your main point of the topic sentence. (Relating it to the thesis and providing additional information as needed.) 1. Millions of Americans were laid off, having no sources of income to provide for their families
2. “Covid-19 has disrupted supply chains worldwide” (Beckman & Countryman, 2021 p. 1596.)
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C. Analysis: Your explanation of how the evidence supports the topic sentence/thesis statement: include examples of causes or effects.
1. The evidence illustrates the profound economic upheaval caused by the Covid-
19 pandemic, which directly impacts mental health in America. 2. economic instability precipitated by the pandemic serves as a significant cause of heightened mental health issues in America, underscoring the need for comprehensive interventions to address the intersection of economic and psychological well-being.
D. Qualifier – demonstrates the limits to the argument or shows that it is not always true in all situations:
1.
While the evidence presented highlights the significant impact of economic instability on mental health during the Covid-19 pandemic, it is important to acknowledge that individual experiences may based on factors such as access to resources, social support networks, and coping mechanisms. E. Rebuttal – Address counterclaims and how they may be addressed withing the scope of
your arguments.
1. Counterclaims may argue that government stimulus packages and unemployment benefits have helped migrate the economic impact of the pandemic.
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2. While government stimulus packages and unemployment benefits may have helped ease the financial strain, the fact people had to ask for help to begin with is
more than enough to mentally strain an individual.
F. Summative Sentence: Restates the topic sentence in a new way and transitions your ideas from one paragraph to the next.
1. Thus, while government interventions may have alleviated some of the economic burdens caused by the pandemic, the psychological toll of having to rely on external support underscores the enduring impact of economic instability on mental health in America. V. One or more Body Paragraphs to Discuss Opposing viewpoints. A. Topic Sentence: Introduces opposing viewpoint(s)
1. Some argue that social media is a vital communication tool that has helped alleviate feelings of social isolation and provided support during the pandemic.
2. Others say that the government should have kept pumping money into stimulus programs and keep unemployment benefits high to alleviate the economic slowdown to help with mental health problems in the United States. B. Refutation – Explanation of why you disagree. (Avoid first and second person pronouns.)
1. While proponents of social media argue that it serves as a valuable means of connection during times of physical distancing, it is important to critically examine its impact on mental health within the pandemic.
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2. While increasing stimulus programs and unemployment benefits may provide temporary relief to individuals facing economic hardship, solely relying on such measures may overlook the broader systemic issues contributing to mental health challenges during the pandemic.
C. Facts, examples, etc. of why you disagree and why your position is better than the opposition. 1. “All facets of the economy have been impacted, with double-digit decreases in the number of flights, tourism severely affected, and oil prices decreasing to levels not seen in two decades” (Beckman & Countryman, 2022 p. 1595).
2. “More distal exposure to the pandemic through the media might also promote mental health problems as individuals may feel intense empathic concern and distress witnessing
or constantly hearing about other people’s painful struggles with coronavirus” (Guo et. Al., 2020 p. 2) D. Summative Sentence 1. While social media and economic support measures may offer some benefits, their potential negative effects and limited scope in addressing the multifaceted nature of mental health challenges during the pandemic necessitate a more comprehensive approach that considers individual differences and systemic factors beyond economic status or online interactions. VI. Conclusion Paragraph A.
Summarizes Main Points of your Body Paragraphs.
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1.
It is evident that the Covid-19 pandemic has brought to light the intricate relationship between economic instability, social isolation, and mental health challenges in America. 2.
A comprehensive approach is needed, one that considers the complex interplay of economic, social, and psychological factors in shaping mental health outcomes during
the pandemic. B.
Reinstate your thesis in a new way.
1.
The Covid-19 pandemic has unveiled a complex web of challenges impacting mental health in America, from the economic upheaval to the social isolation induced by necessary public health measures. C.
Leaves the reader with final thought and/or call to action.
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As we reflect on the profound impact of the Covid-19 pandemic on mental health in America, it is crucial to recognize that the journey toward recovery extends beyond the resolution of immediate crisis.
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