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Feedback for Project 3: Cloud Services Offerings
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Overall Feedback
12/03/23 - Ungraded review for feedback only
Hey Edem,
This looks good. You're on the right track!
Suggested Improvements:
A summary table covering BO’s cloud portfolio, something on the lines as below, can be helpful.
(note: this is just an example. Use your appropriate Services)
Use Case
Cloud Service Offering
BO Website
AWS Elastic Beanstalk
BO Messaging
Microsoft 365
BO Disaster & Recovery Amazon S3/Glacier and NetApp Cloud Sync
BO IT Self-Service Portal AWS Service Catalog
Etc.
Etc.
Use the material from this milestone and incorporate it in your final P3 submission.
No need to resubmit. Just use your material from this milestone, incorporating my feedback, into
your final P3 submission report.
Hey Edem,
You are doing great and are touching all the right topics. Just use the AWS Price Calculator (or some other equivalent tool) for BallotOnline’s TCO. Show with screenshot(s), the analysis captured inside of this report providing an overview to the total cost of ownership.
Don't resubmit this milestone. Just incorporate this feedback into your final P3 report.
Feedback for Project 3: TCO Analysis
12/03/23 - ungraded review for feedback only
Hey Edem, you're doing great but just see my feedback on your previous
milestone. I need to know you've learnt the use of this (or such a) cost calculator tool.
Feedback for Project 3: ROI Analysis
You are doing wonderful! Well done your screenshot on p10. Looks very good!
Suggestions for improvement:
Pay attention to your Executive Summary. No need to state the obvious here but make sure to include the key takeaways that you want your accountable executive to known by reading this section, e.g. A quick pie chart showing investment to profit percentages, and an accompanying table of $ amount A summary statement which could be something like “BO can save N% in the next 3 years by moving its Infrastructure to AWS with the total savings of $N during the same period”.
A bar graph of 3-year Total Cost of Ownership drawn from a table where
you can have On-Prem and AWS in columns and Server, Storage, Network, etc. in rows. Include both the graph and the table in your
presentation. OR - Two comparative bar graphs comparing On-Prem to AWS Costs, broken down under Server, Storage, Network, etc. over three years can be helpful.
A pie chart showing investment to profit percentages, and an accompanying table of $ amount invested, investment return, ROI %age,
annualized ROI %age, investment return %, etc. can be very helpful for your executive in making informed decisions.
Under Data and Use Case
section, two comparative bar graphs comparing on-prem and AWS costs breakdown under Server, Storage, Network, etc. over three years can be helpful.
No need to resubmit this milestone; just incorporate my feedback into your final P3 submission.
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