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Contemporary Poetry Assessment – Ian Gee
Step 1: Graphic Organizer
Find two poems to analyze from the contemporary period. You must use poems written by the poets on this list.
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Adrienne Rich
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Alice Walker
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Anne Sexton
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Elizabeth Bishop
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Eudora Welty
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Flannery O'Connor
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Gwendolyn Brooks
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James Baldwin
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Lorraine Hansberry
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Ray Bradbury
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Tennessee Williams
Poem 1
Poem 2
Title
We Real Cool
We Have Not Long to Love
Author
Gwendolyn Brooks
Tennessee Williams
Date
1959-1960
1991
Poem
The Pool Players.
Seven at the Golden Shovel.
We real cool. We Left school. We
Lurk late. We
Strike straight. We
Sing sin. We Thin gin. We
Jazz June. We Die soon.
We have not long to love.
Light does not stay.
The tender things are those
we fold away.
Coarse fabrics are the ones
for common wear.
In silence I have watched you
comb your hair.
Intimate the silence,
dim and warm.
I could but did not, reach
to touch your arm.
I could, but do not, break
that which is still.
(Almost the faintest whisper
would be shrill.)
So moments pass as though
they wished to stay.
We have not long to love.
A night. A day
....
Step 2: Analyze Each Poem.
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Using the background information from the period, complete an analysis of each poem and fill out the graphic organizer. Your responses must be in complete sentences. Poem 1
Poem 2
Poetic
elements
The poem uses anaphora. The poem uses internal rhyme. The author uses repetition to “we”. The
author uses imagery.
The poem uses metaphors to explain the story of dying soon. The author uses imagery.
Theme
The poem describes a group of teenagers that are “Rebels”. The more than likely pay for their behavior with their lives.
The poem tells a story of how you go through life fast and then you die. William explains that love must be cherished. There is limited
time to life and goes by quick so life and love must be enjoyed now.
Historic
influence
Teenagers are now being more rebellious. People are old wish they would have enjoyed life and love more instead going through life quickly. Tells the readers to enjoy life and not make it “quick”. Author's
perspectiv
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Teenagers that are rebellious need to understand who they are and fix themselves. I wish for people to not make life quick but enjoy and love others.
Step 3: Identify Similarities and Differences.
Using your style analysis of each poem, compare the two poems and fill out the graphic organizer. Your responses must be in complete sentences. Similarities
Differences
Poetic
Elements
They both use imagery to make a better understanding of what they mean. They both talk about how you
die quickly.
One is short and the other is big.
One describes rebellious teenagers and the other describes people as a whole. One talks about love and how its important. Themes
They both say people die quickly. They both see how life goes by fast.
One shows love interest and how you should not make life “quick”. The other tells how teenagers are rebellious and do
what they want even if it’s not good.
Historic
Influence
Both can help you understand how you need to fix yourself.
Gathers the understanding of what you are doing currently. Life comes and goes in a blink.
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Author's
Perspective
You die soon. You should change and fix yourself. Don’t just live a “normal” life.
Step 4: Write Your Analysis.
Using the information from the chart above, write an analysis comparing the poems. Your analysis should be in paragraph form, using proper grammar and writing conventions, and be at least 300 words in length. The realization that everything will come to an end is the subject of Williams' "We Have Not Long To Love.” In a strange way, what makes things unique is that they are only temporary. Williams explains the necessity of cherishing love at that precise moment by pointing to the fleeting nature of love. Indeed, life and love must be enjoyed now because there is only so much time left to live. Gwendolyn Brooks first published a poem titled "We Real Cool" in 1960. A group of teenagers hanging out outside of a pool hall is the subject of the poem. It portrays these teenagers as rebels who will likely die for their actions and proudly defy convention and authority.
We Have Not Long To Love talks about how you should enjoy and love life. We Real Cool talks about how teenagers or adults are being rebels. We Have Not Long to Love is more targeted towards to old people and adults. We Real Cool is targeted at teenagers and adults. In Williams poem is longer because it is more descriptive. Gwendolyn’s poem is shorter since it doesn’t need to be descriptive. We Real Cool tells the reader how people are living. We Have Not Long To Love tells the reader that people should change their life and go about it differently to not make life “quick”.
Both poems end up talking about how you die quickly which make the poems similar. Both poems point out problems that people have and that you need to fix them.
The two poems both have meanings but are a little different in We Have Not Long To Love it means that you need to start loving or you are going to die quick and regret not loving. In We Real Cool the poem means that you will pay for your actions. Unless Otherwise Noted All Content © 2022 Florida Virtual School. FlexPoint Education
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Contemporary Poetry Rubric
On Target
Almost There
Needs Improvement
Graphic
Organizers
(20 points)
20-16 points
All information is complete for the poems. 15-11 points
Most information is complete for the poems.
10-0 points
Little or no information is complete for the poems.
Style
Analysis
(20 points)
20-16 points
The analysis thoroughly discusses
poetic elements, theme, historic influence, and author's perspective.
The analysis uses specific examples to
prove its points.
15-11 points
The analysis mentions poetic elements, theme, historic influence, and author's perspective.
The analysis uses some examples to prove its points.
10-0 points
The analysis only discusses a few of the following topics:
poetic elements, theme, historic influence, and author's perspective.
The analysis does not use examples to prove its points.
Grammar,
Usage, and
Mechanics
(10 points)
10-8 points
The analysis is at least 300 words in length.
Standard grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure rules are followed with minimal errors.
7-6 points
The analysis is at least 300 words in length.
Standard grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure rules are followed with some errors that
do not impede readability.
5-0 points
The analysis is shorter than 300 words in length.
Standard grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure rules are not followed, and this affects readability.
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