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ENG 150
Model Essay and Video Structure Worksheet
Misconception
Step 1: Analyze a Video
Choose
ONE
of the following videos and complete the table below.
The Hot Coffee Case
(10:56)
Dungeons & Dragons
(13:13)
Which video did you watch?
The Hot Coffee Case
How does the video introduce
the topic? Do they give
definitions, background, a
historical overview, share a
story, or something else?
The video begins by captivating the audience with a
persuasive and intriguing introduction, highlighting the
narrative of a woman who allegedly became a billionaire by
suing McDonald's over the extremely hot coffee they
served. Subsequently, the video clarifies that this initial
portrayal was a misconception, revealing that the actual
facts surrounding the case were far more intricate than
initially suggested.
How do they reveal the
problems with the
misconception in the topic?
Do they make one side look
really dumb and the other side
look smart? Or do they try to
show more understanding for
one side before showing
another perspective?
They unveiled the real circumstances through the
presentation of data and facts during the onset. Once this
became evident, they systematically illustrated how the
entire situation seemed absurd due to the widespread
dissemination of insufficient information. By presenting
detailed facts and comprehensive details of previous
incidents and showcasing the written correspondence
between Stella and McDonald's, which ultimately led to a
lawsuit, they tarnished McDonald’s reputation. In an effort
to resolve the case outside of legal proceedings, McDonald’s
offered a meager sum that fell short of covering Stella’s
medical expenses.
How does the video end? Do
they give recommendations?
Argue a specific side? Leave it
up to you to decide?
The video concluded with a concise rhetorical examination
and summary, prompting contemplation on the matter.
Despite the media's inaccurate information, my perspective
on the issue remained unchanged as the presented facts
were both dependable and highly persuasive. McDonald's
effectively illustrated the impact of the case on Stella until
her passing and its enduring effect on her family, particularly
by lowering the temperature of the coffee.
Does this video structure help
you consider how you might
introduce your topic, organize
information, and/or end your
paper? Or will you do
something very different?
Why?
Indeed. The presentation provided a well-defined structure
that offered sufficient details for everyone involved to grasp
the initiation and conclusion of the events. Additionally, it
elucidated how the media's reporting contributed to the
misinterpretation of the case. I have gained insights into
skillfully unveiling a misconstrued subject in a manner that
is positively received.
ENG 150
Model Essay and Video Structure Worksheet
Misconception
Step 2: Analyze a Model Essay
Read the Model Essay you downloaded with the packet and answer the following questions.
How does the paper introduce
the topic? Do they give
definitions, background, a
historical overview, share a
story, or something else?
To begin, a comparison was made between the ideas of a
traditional library and an online library. The narrative delves
into the circumstances leading to the accident and the
hardships endured by the victim. It also outlines efforts to
resolve the conflict peacefully and provides a background on
past incidents involving injuries akin to Stella's.
What’s the thesis of this
essay? (Paraphrase or quote it
from the essay.)
The progression of the case and the temperature of the
coffee played a role in driving my determination to seek
justice and a positive outcome for the victim. The details
surrounding the events leading to the tragedy and its
aftermath fueled my commitment. While digital access to
information is convenient and comes with various benefits,
physical books and libraries also have their advantages.
What's the main idea of each
body paragraph in the essay?
Write down 1 - 2 sentences for
each body paragraph. Next to
the sentences about the main
idea, write the number of
sources used in that
paragraph.
Paragraph 1: Introduction: In the first paragraph, the two
concepts being discussed are introduced.
Paragraph 2: Benefits of Tablets and Online Information: The
second paragraph explores the advantages of utilizing
tablets and online information.
Paragraph 3: Convenient and Accessible Use of Tablets:
Paragraph three delves into the convenient and easily
accessible aspects of using tablets.
Paragraph 4: Limitations of Tablet Learning: The fourth
paragraph highlights the constraints associated with
learning on a tablet, emphasizing the reduced capacity for
knowledge acquisition.
Paragraph 5 – 6th: Disadvantages of Tablets: The fifth
paragraph introduces the fifth drawback of tablets, focusing
on health issues, while contrasting this with the benefit of
less screen time offered by physical libraries. Advantages of
Libraries: In the sixth paragraph, the positive aspect of
libraries is presented, emphasizing their role in promoting
neighbourhood gatherings.
Paragraph 7 – 8th: Library Functionality: Paragraph seven
discusses libraries as providers of internet access, leading to
the recommended solution proposed in paragraph eight,
which advocates for the combined utilization of both
concepts.
Paragraph 9: Library Functionality: Paragraph seven
discusses libraries as providers of internet access, leading to
ENG 150
Model Essay and Video Structure Worksheet
Misconception
the recommended solution proposed in paragraph eight,
which advocates for the combined utilization of both
concepts.
Paragraph 10: Conclusion: The final paragraph, paragraph
ten, concludes by advocating for the effective integration of
tablets and libraries for optimal use.
How does the paper end? Do
they give recommendations?
Argue for a specific side? Give
too much of their own
opinion? Leave it up to you to
decide?
Yes, the proposal was logical and leveraged the benefits of
contrasting perspectives. It presented details about the
enduring impact on the victim's life and the continuous
repercussions for her family. It also disclosed that following
the legal loss, McDonald's reduced the temperature of the
coffee by 10 degrees.
Does it seem like everything in
the essay connects back to this
thesis? Why or why not? What
(if anything) should be added
or left out?
Yes, every new bit of information seamlessly connects with
the current context. The schedule is well-defined, and the
narrative remains on track. In my opinion, McDonald's
perspective could have included additional details to bolster
their argument
Does this sample paper help
you consider how you might
introduce your topic, organize
information, and/or end your
paper? Or will you do
something very different?
Why? (write 3 -5 sentences)
Yes, this represents the core idea, consistently drawing
comparisons between two key concepts. The narrative is
comprehensive without being intrusive, maintaining a
logical sequence of events. The introduction of the topic and
the conclusion of the story are seamlessly woven together,
creating a remarkably harmonious integration.
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