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Name:_Savreet_Kaur_____ Persuasive Paragraph Organizer Title : ____Ways to improve mental health _____________ A) Topic Sentence (my opinion/argument): Mental Health can be improved by Physical activity, Peer Support Networks, and Therapy Dogs. 1) Reason One: Meditation and other physical exercises are beneficial to avoid stress. i. Fact/Example (back it up): As per the research, 21.4% of Canadians are facing mental health issues right now, which is also causing internal and external body problems for them. ("Mental Health in the Canadian Workplace", CCOHS,2018) ii. Explanation/Analysis _ There are some workplaces and schools where gyms are available, but I think gyms or yoga classes are a must everywhere. As they help people a lot. I personally feel under pressure sometimes because of my work and study but last month I joined gym classes which helped me in many ways. I can stay fit and avoid any tension. 2) Reason Two: Crete Peer support groups for support i. Fact/Example (back it up): Peer support groups are effective. I have a real-life example for this point. My husband is in the Indian Army and every single person working in the Army has a ‘buddy group’. Those who are members of this group share everything with each other, they emotionally support each other. Explanation/Analysis By creating groups that share similar interests,

experiences, and challenges, they can provide support to each other and can also share their emotions with others. 3) Reason Three: Therapy Dogs are really helpful. i. Fact/Example (back it up): According to a recent survey, Therapy Dogs are getting popular everywhere. For example, most of the Universities in North America started to implement a Dog Therapy Program to avoid stress and to promote the well-being of students. (Spruin et al., 2020) ii. Explanation/Analysis - People use Therapy Dogs to avoid stress and feel relaxed. They support a person's mental health by providing attention and comfort to them. Their unconditional love have therapeutic benefit for those facing health challenges. 4) Opposing Side’s Reason: Dogs are not for everyone. i. Rebuttal (Your response—Shut them down!): Some people are allergic to dogs but there are other animals like cats, which can be a good therapy animal. The point here is to avoid stress and improve well- being, so does it matter what animal it is? the only thing that matters is that they are helping you. B) Concluding Sentence (Connects back to your introduction): _Therefore, I provide some of the ways which can help people to improve their physical and mental health. Nowadays, stress is everywhere, so it is important to give yourself time to overcome that problem.

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