Your response addresses the tasks outlined in the case study and provides a detailed answer
to the application for a liquor license and the development of a Drugs and Alcohol Policy for
The Best Bite Café. However, I noticed a couple of potential improvements:
1. **Email and Attachment for Policy Distribution:**
You've mentioned the task to distribute the new policy by writing a covering email and
sending the email along with the attached policy to the employees. However, in your
provided response, you didn't include the actual email content or the attachment. Make
sure to include a sample email text and attach the policy in your response.
2. **Grammar and Clarity:**
Some sentences in your response could be improved for better clarity. For example, in the
Drugs and Alcohol Policy section, the sentence "The misuse of alcohol and different drugs
gives a sizeable trouble..." might be clearer if rephrased. Additionally, ensure consistency in
language and style throughout your response.
3. **Email Subject:**
When sending out the policy, include a subject for the email. This can be a brief, clear
statement indicating the purpose of the email, such as "New Drugs and Alcohol Policy -
Action Required."
Please make these adjustments and provide the missing email content and attachment, and
your response will be more comprehensive.
