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1. Page 2+ Running Header: Long-term impact of fish oil consumption on heart disease Explanation: There is no running head on all pages after page 1. The second page should have the paper's title centered with every major word capitalized. the title should be typed in bold font. Corrected version: Long-Term Impact of Fish Oil Consumption on Heart Disease 2. Headings/Subheadings (assume this is the first level heading/subheading on p. 1 of your research paper) Long-term impact of fish oil consumption on heart disease Introduction Explanation: It is not necessary to write the word introduction, the paper title at the top of page 1 acts as a first-level heading (American Psychological Association, 2019) Corrected version: Long-Term Impact of Fish Oil Consumption on Heart Disease 3. Citations (also called an in-text citation) According to Smith (2009, pp. 29), fish oil consumption ... Explanation: An in-text citation should be paraphrased or written as a direct quote followed by the page number. The page number is only used for the direct quote (Rustad, n.d). For a single page, the abbreviation p should be used for the page number. Corrected version: Smith (2009) explains that fish oil consumption ... or According to Smith (2009), "fish oil consumption..." (p.29) 4. Citations (government agency web site) The American Heart Association favors the weekly consumption of fatty fish ( https://healthyforgood.heart.org/Eat-smart/Articles/Fish-and-Omega- 3-Fatty-Acids Links to an external site. ). Explanation: The website url should not be included in the citation but in the reference list. The year needs to be added. Corrected version: The American Heart Association (year) favors the weekly consumption of fatty fish

5. Citation In an interview with the Chairperson of the Viscero-Somatic Center at Logan University for the purpose of this assignment, Dr. David Beavers mentioned his support for the use of fish oil in the daily diet (Beavers, D., October, 26, 2017) Explanation: An author's title and first name should not be included. Corrected version: In an interview with the Chairperson of the Viscero- Somatic Center at Logan University for the purpose of this assignment, Beavers (2017) mentioned his support for the use of fish oil in the daily diet. 6. References (easy fix) Guallar E, Hennekens, C.H., Sacks F.M., Willett, W.C, Stampfer, M.J. (1995). A prospective study of plasma fish oil levels and incidence of myocardial infarction in U.S. male physicians. Journal of the American College Of Cardiology, 25 (2), 387-94. Explanation: some punctuation missing in the authors' names and page numbers should be in ascending order. Corrected version: Guallar, E., Hennekens, C.H., Sacks, F.M., Willett, W.C., Stampfer, M.J. (1995). A prospective study of plasma fish oil levels and incidence of myocardial infarction in U.S. male physicians. Journal of the American College Of Cardiology, 25 (2), 94-387. 7. References (slightly more challenging) Virtanen JK; Nyantika AN; Kauhanen J; Voutilainen S; Tuomainen TP (2012). Serum long-chain n-3 polyunsaturated fatty acids, methylmercury and blood pressure in an older population. Hypertension research: Journal Of The Japanese Society Of Hypertension , Vol. 35 (10), pp. 1000-4. Explanation: Authors' names are not separated appropriately. The volume number should be stated without "vol", the issue number should be in parentheses, page number should be in ascending order. Corrected version: Virtanen, J.K., Nyantika, A.N., Kauhanen, J., Voutilainen, S., Tuomainen, T.P. (2012). Serum long-chain n-3 polyunsaturated fatty acids, methylmercury and blood pressure in an older population. Hypertension research: Journal Of The Japanese Society Of Hypertension , 35(10), 4-1000. 8. References (a complete mess! - No need to explain all the errors...just re-type it correctly)

Pounis, George D., Panagiotakos, Demosthenes B.; Chrysohoou, Christina; Aggelopoulos, Panagiotis; Tsiamis, Eleftherios; Pitsavos, Christos; Stefanadis, Christodoulos. Long-term fish consumption is associated with lower risk of 30-day cardiovascular disease events in survivors from an acute coronary syndrome International Journal of Cardiology. Aug2009, Vol. 136 Issue 3, p344-346. 3p. DOI: 10.1016/j.ijcard.2008.04.063 Corrected version: Pounis, G. D., Panagiotakos, D. B., Chrysohoou, C., Aggelopoulos, P., Tsiamis, E., Pitsavos, C., & Stefanadis, C. (2009). Long-term fish consumption is associated with lower risk of 30-day cardiovascular disease events in survivors from an acute coronary syndrome. International journal of cardiology , 136 (3), 344–346. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ijcard.2008.04.063 References: American Psychological Association. (2019). Headings . Https://Apastyle.apa.org. https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar- guidelines/paper-format/headings Links to an external site. Rustad, J. (n.d.). CSSLibraryGuides: Citation Help for APA, 7th Edition: In- text Citations . https://libguides.css.edu/APA7thEd/Citations#:~:text=If %20the%20source%20does%20not

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