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Writing and Artificial Intelligence Reflection
Metropolitan community College
ENGL 1010: English Composition I
Professor: Chad Jorgensen
March 15, 2024
Writing and Artificial Intelligence Reflection
The difference between the paragraphs is clear. The original paragraph is not as elaborate and
detailed; however, it is more of a human like approach to tell the story of how and why I decided
to join the Muslim community. The AI-generated passage is professional, and it answered each
individual question in more of a superficial, informative, and well-structured manner. The
weakness of the original paragraph is sentence structured as to the AI-generated version lacks
some “humanity.” Using AI as an initial draft and building block in my future paragraphs is something I will
implement. I genuinely like the way that it incorporated and summarized my experience. As well
as the sentence flow it created with each sentence's transition. I believe in using as many
resources as possible to grow and develop my skills not only in everyday life but in my
academics, so using AI as an inspiration and example is something I look forward to. Original passage: “I'm proud to share that a few weeks ago I made the choice to become a Muslim. I grew up as a
Christian but personally don't think the religion gave me the structure that I needed as a child or
teenager to transition into adulthood. After two years of being exposed to the Muslim
community and seeing the structure, respect, love, loyalty, and care that followers of Islam have,
for not only each other but individuals who are not part of the religion was captivating to my
heart and soul. I had never in my life met a group of people that have shown me the love,
forgiveness, loyalty, and support as my Muslim friends have. The impact that Islam has had in
my life is very meaningful to me and it's the path that I want to raise and share with my
children.”
AI-generated passage:
“As a recent convert to the Muslim community, I've been profoundly touched by the love,
loyalty, and sense of belonging displayed by my fellow Muslims. Though I've only been a
member for a few weeks, the warmth and acceptance I've received have made a lasting
impression. What many of my classmates might not realize is the depth of connection and
support that permeates the Muslim community, extending not only to its members but also to
those outside of it. The structure and values inherent in Islam's teachings have resonated deeply
with me, particularly in my desire to raise my children with strong moral and spiritual
foundations. This community is vital to me because it provides a nurturing environment where I
can grow in faith and character alongside others who share my beliefs. One particularly
meaningful experience for me was witnessing the genuine care and compassion my Muslim
friends showed to one another and to individuals in need, which inspired me to embrace Islam
wholeheartedly and commit to its teachings.”
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References
ChatGPT. (March 16
th
, 2024.). “Write me a paragraph for my class. The prompt given to us is the
following. "Tell the class about a community to which you belong and a meaningful experience
you’ve had in this community. How long have you been a member of this community, and what
is the community like? What might your classmates not know about this community? Why is this
community important to you? Why was your personal experience in this community meaningful
to you?" i am part of the muslim community, i converted a few weeks ago, the love and loyalty
shown by my muslim friends for each other and people outside of the community drew me in. i
also like the structure islams teachings has and want to raise my children with such values” In
Chat.openai.com. Retrieved March 16
th
, 2024, from https://chat.openai.com/c/9081fca7-4612-
48b6-8b92-9d3a6b3d6595