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Collapse SubdiscussionNicole Fites Nicole Fites Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 9:18am Hello, I'm Nikki, currently pursuing my associate degree at Ivy Tech with plans to transfer for a bachelor’s degree in business management. I have been with my current employer for 10 years. I want to continue to grow within the company, so I decided it was time to get my degree so I can continue down my career path. My LinkedIn profile header would be the following: Seasoned and proactive sales manager with a comprehensive history in sales and leadership within the mobility manufacturing sector. followed by more details which includes, Successfully balanced cost reduction with increased sales and heightened customer satisfaction. Played a pivotal role in implementing multiple programs, optimizing processes, and enhancing e-commerce utilization. A proficient leader with finely tuned listening skills, committed to delivering business results and ensuring customer satisfaction. I'm targeting individuals seeking higher managerial roles in sales or process optimization. These prospects are likely to focus on keywords such as "reduction" and "increased sales" in their hiring criteria. I aim to convey that I possess managerial experience and a strong ability to identify and implement measures for reducing waste and optimizing time efficiency. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionErika Campbell Erika Campbell Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 6:53pm Hey Nicole, I really like your profile header. I think it is very eye catching and tells me exactly what it is that you do. I also like the way you summed up some of your accomplishments. Your keywords are spot on with your target audience. If I had to make a suggestion it would be to add some data into your accomplishments and roles. These could be the number of programs you played a role in implementing or the percentage of utilization enhancement you achieved. Reducing waste is a key component in manufacturing. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionCarrington Crutcher Carrington Crutcher Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 7:44pm

Hi Nikki, I enjoyed reading your response and I must say that I agree with you. Once you obtain the bachelors degree and mix that in with your time on the job, I'm sure the opportunities will be endless. Your LinkedIn header sounds very professional and educated, which is two things that can and will grab an employer eye. The key words are a big attraction when looking for potential applicants and they click well with your target audience. Your header outlines someone who is well-rounded and very committed to progressing in the field. If I have one thing I would say to add personal achievements/accolades on the job. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionHannah A Chlumsky Hannah A Chlumsky Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 4:04pm My name is Hannah Chlumsky. I am a working mother of two and I began my first attempt at higher learning in Fall 2023 at Ivy Tech. I was homeschooled with very little high school level education achieved. I earned my HSE as an adult in 2014 at the age of 34. I wasn’t sure if I would ever take college courses, but I have recently become motivated to pursue a degree. I have faith in myself and I have been getting good grades so far. The majority of my work experience has been in facilities maintenance; I was a painting contractor and then a city employee painter until the past three years, when I was promoted to office work. I now enjoy a rewarding position as the Forensic Operations Manager of the Indianapolis-Marion County Forensic Services Agency, commonly known as the crime lab. This is a key motivation for my pursuit of a degree, nearly everyone in the crime lab has at least one degree and I am a little ashamed of being undereducated. My likely career goal from this position would be CFO or COO, so I am working towards a business degree. I am starting with the technical certificate so as not to overwhelm myself, but plan to transfer my credits to an Associates and then TSAP to IUPUI eventually. My LinkedIN profile could benefit from including this header: Forensic Operations Manager at the Indianapolis-Marion County Forensic Services Agency. Passionate about serving the community and committed to enhancing agency operations. Experienced in managing emergency response vehicles, addressing employee needs, and maintaining laboratory equipment. Striving for excellence in forensic science and public service. At this juncture of my career, I am not looking to relocate, which would be a necessity of seeking a job outside of this agency. Bearing that in mind, the purpose of my profile is to project an image of professionalism to those within and outside of our agency. I also aim to network with individuals in local government and forensic science professionals nationwide and globally. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNathalia Louise Ferraren Teves

Nathalia Louise Ferraren Teves Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 10:54pm Hi Hannah, I enjoyed reading about your story, and I have full confidence in your ability to achieve your degree. As I read through your response and you mentioned working at the Indianapolis-Marion County Forensic Services Agency, it instantly reminded me of the crime shows I've watched. I genuinely hope that your work is as captivating and thrilling in real life as it is portrayed on TV. As for your header, it effectively conveys a strong commitment to public service and showcases your experience as a Forensic Operations Manager. The clarity in stating your dedication to enhancing agency operations and your passion for serving the community is admirable. The mention of managing emergency response vehicles, addressing employee needs, and maintaining laboratory equipment demonstrates a well rounded skill set in overseeing critical aspects of forensic operations. To strengthen your networking goals, you could specify how you plan to engage with local government and forensic science professionals, whether through collaboration, conferences, or other networking avenues. Providing more context on your professional achievements and networking strategies could make your profile more compelling to those both within and outside your agency. Overall, your header is excellent, and I extend my best wishes on your academic and professional journey! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionHannah A Chlumsky Hannah A Chlumsky Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 7:03pm Hi Nathalia! Thanks for your helpful insights on my header and your gracious comments. You made me smile early this morning when I read your comments. Working at the crime lab is a fantastic and fascinating career, and although there are many difficulties that the Crime Scene unit faces, they take great pride in their work and perform an invaluable service for the community. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionWinter Helsel Winter Helsel Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 11:51am Hello Hannah, it's so amazing you have decided to go back to college no matter the circumstances that were given to you, so props!! I think that having experience in life will push you so much farther in college than the high school classes you may have missed. I am 20 and a sophomore here at Ivy Tech and I feel as if high school did not prepare much for college so I have high hopes you're going to kill it this year! Opinion-based I think the fact you work at the same place as many people with a degree shows that you do not need one to get a great job even though getting a degree feels great and looks great to employers. Working at a crime lab is also one of the coolest things I have heard and can only imagine the crazy things you have

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figured out. Your LinkedIn profile is great and will get employers to look at you and want you to work for them considering the amount of experience you have! Goodluck this 8-weeks!! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionHannah A Chlumsky Hannah A Chlumsky Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 6:59pm Hi Winter! I love your name. Thanks for your warm words- I really appreciate the enthusiasm that so many have when they hear about where I work. It absolutely is as interesting as you think, every other day I find myself shaking my head and saying “You just can’t make this up.” Human nature and what people will do to each other is endlessly surprising. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionCarrington Crutcher Carrington Crutcher Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 6:41pm Hi everyone, I'm Carrington, currently pursuing an associate degree in Business Administration. I am open to transferring to obtain a Bachelors in the future. I am employed by GE Appliances and have been for 5 years. My current role is Senior Project Coordinator. I plan on to grow within the company and make it a career. Real Estate is something that I do as well, and have been for 2 years. My brother and I own a rental property with plans to add more as time goes on. My LinkedIn profile header would read: Well-versed in a project management capacity managing multi-family new build/renovation project from time of initial project registration until project completion. Organized and detailed-oriented project management experience with excellent interpersonal and oral communication. Self starter with the ability to quickly pivot and adapt as unexpected situations arise, while maintaining composure and positive attitude. I am targeting individuals who have projects of their own and needing someone who has done projects before. Keys words I would use are "new build" and "renovation". I am able to rely on my relationships with different delivery companies in various states across the country. Edited by Carrington Crutcher on Jan 15 at 6:42pm Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNathalia Louise Ferraren Teves Nathalia Louise Ferraren Teves Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 10:33pm Hi Carrington,

I enjoyed reading your response to this discussion board and getting to know a little bit about yourself. It's interesting to see the growing interest in real estate, and it's amazing that you and your brother have teamed up to manage a rental property. Moving to your header, it effectively demonstrates your proficiency in project management, especially in multi-family new build and renovation projects. The use of keywords like "new build" and "renovation" precisely targets individuals with specific project needs. Adding words to describe yourself such as "self starter" and addressing how you handle stress and conflict builds trust. On the other hand, incorporating specific projects you've successfully completed would boost the credibility of your header. Additionally, specifying the scope or scale of your projects could provide potential clients with a clearer understanding of your capabilities. Overall, it's a great header! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionGregory Flynn Duvall Gregory Flynn Duvall Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 10:13am Hi Carrington, I love how you open right up with words like well-versed, organized, and detailed- oriented, these are words that many employers will type in the search bar when looking for candidates for a position or job. Your header seems to be worded great, short and simple. The audience you have targeted seems to match your header pretty well, you seem focused on project management and having the working database of previous work relationships and family and friends is huge. I think the things I may add in your heading would be something involving your ability to excel in the world of real estate and maybe add some kind of number figure of projects, like an over under type of thing, something like "have overseen the completion of over 300 projects involving "blank". Just something to contribute to your creditability as a management professional. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJosiah Miracle Josiah Miracle Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 10:25pm Hello Carrington, I saw that you responded to me so I thought I would return the favor. I think that a business administration degree would do you many favors as it relates to your rental property. I have always thought that it would be something that I would try to get into at some point. It's passive income, so why not? I like your LinkedIn profile header, it is straight to the point, yet relays the pertinent information needed to be successful. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNicole Fites

Nicole Fites Jan 19, 2024Jan 19 at 3:21pm Hi Carrington I appreciate the specificity of your focus on project management in your heading, utilizing key words such as organized and demonstrating excellent interpersonal and oral communication skills. Your emphasis on maintaining composure and a positive attitude is a notable aspect that resonates well with individuals seeking project managers. Highlighting your ability to quickly adapt to unexpected situations is crucial in project management, where unforeseen challenges often demand rapid decision-making for project continuity. One suggestion to enhance clarity is to explicitly state the type of projects you aim to manage. For instance, specify whether you aspire to oversee the construction of new multi-family housing units or the renovation of existing buildings to accommodate multi-family facilities. Providing this additional detail in the first sentence can offer a clearer understanding of your professional focus. You may consider incorporating specific details about your past experiences in project management, including relevant metrics that showcase your effectiveness. This can further strengthen your profile by offering tangible evidence of your capabilities in successfully overseeing and delivering projects. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionDalton James Shad May Dalton James Shad May Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 2:32pm Hello Carrington! I think you did a good job explaining your work experience. I think you also did a good job keeping it short and too the point. I think you could expand on your personality highlighting your strengths and weaknesses. I think you could also try and show more about yourself on a personal level Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionErika Campbell Erika Campbell Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 9:31pm Hey Everyone! I am currently in my last semester to complete my associate's degree in accounting. I own my own business advocating for seniors. I have a passion for one of our most vulnerable populations. They are what drives me to keep pushing forward every day. My LinkedIn profile header would be: Passionate About Protecting Seniors' Future: Guardian, Advocate, Future CPA. I wear many hats but all of them are dedicated to providing peace of mind to seniors as well as their family members. I ensure the well-being and financial security of

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seniors by providing professional guardianship and power of attorney services. I am also working to further extend my ethical advocacy through my pursuit of a degree in accounting. This will allow me to further safeguard the financial interests of the seniors I am dedicated to. Whether navigating the healthcare system or managing assets, my commitment is to help seniors face aging challenges with confidence. My LinkedIn profile has a target audience of financial and legal professionals. I receive most of my referrals from senior care facilities and attorneys. Family members or friends are also my intended audience as seniors do not normally get on social media platforms. I want my readers to gain peace of mind and confidence in my ability to provide professional and ethical services as well as in my ability to navigate the Medicare and Medicaid system. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionHannah A Chlumsky Hannah A Chlumsky Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 7:20pm Hi Erika! Thanks for your hugely important work advocating for seniors! It is so important for a vulnerable demographic, especially if they don’t have trustworthy family to aid them. I was at the ER with my daughter on Sunday, and the poor elderly man behind the curtain next door had suffered a terrible fall at home, crushing two vertebrae and a rib. An adult child was there, his POA, and they were discussing how to deal with an abusive family member that was living at home, sounded like a son or a grandson. Theft of medication and personal property. Just hearing the vague details hurt my heart, and the man might never walk again. I love that you are out there doing that good work to help prevent things like this. I applaud you on being so far into your accounting degree. Math is what I struggle with the most. I am pushing my math requirements as far into the future as I can, while I make my way through Kahn Academy to refresh what I do know and learn what I don’t. It is gratifying to be able to help my 6th grader in her common-core assignments and not be lost, but I’ll be glad when I can leave math alone for a while :) I appreciate your understanding of the LinkedIn header and the constraints of the 220-character limit. I think that your header is succinct and tells me what your skill set is. I believe that your profile will attract the kind of interest you are aiming for. My only suggestion is that the description following the header might be a bit personable, but you are targeting a different demographic, as the families are likely seeking the personal touch for their loved ones. Edited by Hannah A Chlumsky on Jan 18 at 7:18pm Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionStacey L Beckner Stacey L Beckner Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 8:27pm Hi Erika! I work in the medical field in a small town. I feel that we don't provide enough education to the seniors and their family members about what services are available. Many

don't understand professional guardianship and power of attorney. Thank you for what you are doing for our seniors! I like your LinkedIn profile "Passionate about protecting Seniors Future" that is a very catching statement. Good luck with this semester and finishing up your degree. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNathalia Louise Ferraren Teves Nathalia Louise Ferraren Teves Jan 15, 2024Jan 15 at 9:44pm Hi there, I'm Nathalia! I graduated from high school in 2022, and currently, I'm on the process of earning my prerequisite credits from Ivy Tech. My goal is to pursue a bachelor's degree in Business Marketing. Right now, I'm deciding between IU and Purdue – both excellent options in Northwest Indiana among a few others. My family is my biggest inspiration, particularly my mom, who is a dedicated nurse. Despite the challenges, I see her commitment and hard work every day, and it motivates me to strive for the same level of perseverance in my career. I can only hope to be half as amazing as she is. Currently, I'm balancing part time work at a bank with my studies. Looking ahead, my post bachelor's degree plan involves working in an office, though the specifics are a bit hazy at the moment. I'm still young and hopefully later on down the road I truly settle on what I want to do in life. What I do know is that my heart is set on eventually opening my own event planning business. My passion started at a party store I used to work at, where I discovered a genuine passion for being a part of significant milestones in people's lives whether it may be birthdays, weddings, or baby showers. With that being said, I think people should do what they LOVE and not work at a job they hate because it pays the bills. My LinkedIn profile header would include the following: A dedicated professional in the banking industry, who is passionate about making a positive impact on people's daily lives through financial assistance. Beyond that current role, aspires to leverage creativity and passion for connecting with others by establishing an event planning business, creating unforgettable experiences for clients' significant life moments. Through my header, my goal to connect with those who share the "passion" for fostering a "positive impact" in everyday life, particularly in the realm of customer service where the constant effort to create positive interactions is crucial. Echoing the words of primatologist Jane Goodall, I believe that every action we take can make a difference, and it's essential to determine the kind of impact we aspire to create. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionGregory Flynn Duvall Gregory Flynn Duvall Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 10:02am Hi Nathalia, I think it's great to come out of high school and be so focused on your future, you seem to be heading in the right direction and I know plans change quite often but I agree with

work should be something you love. An old saying is, "You'll never work a day in your life doing something you love". I like how in your heading you used words like dedicated, passion, and empathizing the positive impact you would make. Marketing is a tough and brutal area in the business world, so making it be known that you have a passion for it and want to help create those lasting relationships will definitely help the audience look at your profile. I would maybe only add how you would be wailing to learn and grow to not only help create lasting working relationships, but to keep and hold onto those, the business world is always changing and being willing to change with it is huge. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNicole Fites Nicole Fites Jan 19, 2024Jan 19 at 4:01pm I like your positive and charismatic approach in your profile. It's evident that you aim to create a positive experience for your clients by leveraging your creativity and passion, and using words like creativity, passion, and positive impact effectively targets the audience you want to appeal to. To enhance clarity, consider adjusting the order of your sentences. Starting with your desire to leverage creativity and passion to create positive experiences for clients can provide a more focused introduction. Following that, you can provide a background in banking and financial assistance, listing relevant experiences in the workforce to establish your professional foundation. This way, you align your profile more closely with the type of role you are seeking, and it may better attract the audience you intend to reach. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionGregory Flynn Duvall Gregory Flynn Duvall Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 9:50am Hello, my name is Gregg. I am working towards my associate degree in business administration. I am a United States Army veteran where I served for 7 years. I work as a real estate agent for Huff Realty here in Lawrenceburg, Indiana. I help facilitate the buy and sale of property all across Indiana, along with helping people fine their dream homes, I also am a liaison between members of the Armed forces transitioning out of military service and moving back to Indiana to settle down, which is something I didn’t have in 2018 when I moved back. I also own and operate my own auto mechanic shop as this has been my field of expertise for 14 years and something I am very passionate about. My LinkedIn header would most likely be something like, Professional, self-driven individual, with years of management skills and a drive to achieve excellence in the business community. Proven track record of organized and detailed sales logs, finances and records for multiple

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businesses. Excellent skills in communication and very adaptive to any and all circumstances that may arise in day-to-day operations. My target audience would most likely be a company looking for someone in upper management or accounting, I will also be working towards my CPA after graduating so accounting or being hired into some kind of upper management would be great to me. I have worked for myself for many years so all of this would be new to me. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionWinter Helsel Winter Helsel Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 11:42am Hello Greg, I wanted to start this off by saying thank you for your service! Although that was the first thing I noticed, your post was also great as well! I have always wanted to get into real estate and was considering becoming an agent this summer. As I have gotten older I realized real estate is one of the best investments you can make for your future. Reading your LinkedIn profile I think many companies would feel confident that the experience you have would allow them to feel comfortable in their decision to hire you. Although you say this would be new to you, having experience in many different fields gives you a perspective they may not have had before which could overall be another great reason to hire you! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNancy Ellen Barnes Nancy Ellen Barnes Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 9:30pm Hello Gregg, First off, I want to thank you for your service! Thank you for serving our country! I think your LinkedIn header was very well written and gave an accurate description of what you are capable of as an employee. Your explanation and well planned out description is enticing to employers. Having experience in many different fields can be helpful. It shows that you are willing to learn many different things and grow within the company. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionWinter Helsel Winter Helsel Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 11:33am Hello fellow classmates, My name is Winter Helsel and I just turned 20 recently! I am in my second year of business administration but would love to continue on a 4-year-college for business marketing! My motivation for getting my degree is not to let the cards given to me ruin my potential for the future. I want to be able to say I got myself out of that hole and although I do not have children now I am thinking of their future and what I could do to set them up in the best way possible. I

have only traveled in the States but I would love to be able to work my future job in marketing anywhere I go, with that being said I love how social media has evolved my generation and how it's going to affect future generations so I am also hoping to learn the ways of social media and allow that to push me past the limits of the average 9-5. My LinkedIn Profile would say: Helping business leaders make marketing happen again! Professional hard-working marketing associate who uses unique-attributes to find your target market all while easily having the resources to find a bid, a budget, and a schedule that will work for you and your team. Passionate about the power of social media and finding growth through specific data analysis for you and your company. I would be writing my Linkedln post for companies to find me and use me to build their brands and get them out to the correct market. Allowing for me to help can allow them to find what groups of people can help them grow, what ad's, where to put them, and why they need to put ad's there to target their correct market. Allowing for someone to help pick up the load and find other ways they may not have tried to get sales can allow for many new customers! Edited by Winter Helsel on Jan 16 at 11:52am Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNatalie Renee Douthit Natalie Renee Douthit Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 11:52pm Winter, I love your openness to social media and with a degree in marketing, you have to have that drive to use all your avenues. I am in the same boat, no children but thinking of how to create a future for them (if they're in the cards for me) that I did not experience growing up. I can tell through your post that you are a driven individual. I like your header a lot. I think you keyed in on your specialty. I would maybe change the wording. The "you and yours" twice in the header is repetitive. I think that you could leave the first as "you" and the last as "your company." It changes the wording up and gives it a different feel. Overall I really liked your post and I think you'll do great! Have a great semester! Natalie Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionAudrey Larisa Mize Audrey Larisa Mize

Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 1:59pm Hello Everyone, My name is Audrey Mize and I am interested in supply chain management. I've been working in the heavier duty automotive side of things for about 5 years now and I love it. I currently work for an Allison Transmission Dealer in the parts department as a manager. I love the in's and out's of a business and things that can improve them. What motivates me is the life I wish to provide my son for the future. He is my drive, and motivator... As well as alarm clock. I'm passionate about fishing and organization, weird combo I know. I want to finish my associates and possibly transfer to a university to get a degree in business. Hello, my name is Audrey Mize and I'm currently I’m working in the parts department for an Allison Transmission dealer, I enjoy my job a lot because I create such great business relationships with customers all over the Midwest. They are very understanding when it comes to problems or parts delays because of the strong relationships built. I still try and do everything I can to help anyone out, whether it’s a customer, or a co-worker. I have great attention to detail and have over four years experience in parts inventory, and order management. My target audience is for potential recruiters looking to hire in the department I am currently involved in. I enjoy most of what I do and the skills required really boil down to being accurate in cycle counts and order predictions. I have an high order amount of over one million dollars in stocked parts, and I have to predict what parts would be needed in the future based on past orders versus what is in stock. I want recruiters to know how dedicated I am to my work and how high I hold myself in the workplace. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionErika Campbell Erika Campbell Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 6:40pm Hey Audrey, I like how passionate you are about your current role and the strong relationships you have built with your customers. I also like how you mentioned your organization not only in business but as a hobby as well. Attention to detail is a huge part of maintaining accurate inventory. If I could give you a suggestion it would be to use simple eye catching words that summarize your position and your accomplishments. Also providing statistics such as the number of parts you manage or the number of business relationships/customer accounts you are in charge of, can be very appealing to recruiters. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionHannah A Chlumsky Hannah A Chlumsky Jan 16, 2024Jan 16 at 7:47pm Hi Audrey!

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I like your weird combination of organization and fishing. I’ll bet your tackle box is impressive and well-organized. I relate to what you shared about your son. I have one myself, though he’s outgrown the little days. He is 25 and graduated from Purdue with a degree in electrical engineering. He started out his first job making quite a bit more than I ever have. Being a mother is rewarding, and it sounds like you are giving your son a lot to look up to. Your job sounds interesting. I spent some time working in the facilities management tool crib when I was on light duty one year. I enjoyed organizing, stocking and finding the “customers” just what they needed, whether they quite knew what it was or not. I also enjoyed maintaining relationships with vendors. I have trained as a maintenance and reliability professional as well, and I appreciate your understanding of the importance of predicting the stock that will be needed, versus reacting and increasing downtime while waiting on parts. I believe that your header will attract recruiters, it speaks to your type of experience and your description of your current job lends credibility to your knowledge. I would encourage you to experiment with placing the text in your actual LinkedIn profile, because I found out the hard way that there is a 220-character limit and I had to pare down some phrases that I really liked. I enjoy having a LinkedIn profile but am consistently humbled when I see how polished other professionals are when I go looking! I have lots of work to do as I transition from trades-person to career woman, but I enjoy every minute of it. Best of luck finishing your associates and I hope you choose to go to a four year institution! Edited by Hannah A Chlumsky on Jan 18 at 7:12pm Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionDalton James Shad May Dalton James Shad May Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 2:41pm Hello Audrey! It is cool you work in the parts department. I am a diesel technician. I think you did a good job describing your current job. I think you also did a good job highlighting your strengths. I think you could also include more about your education experience. Also I thinl you should add more about your goals. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionClarice Elizabeth Fischer Clarice Elizabeth Fischer Jan 17, 2024Jan 17 at 2:12pm Hello, my name is Clarice Fischer. I have plans after this semester to transfer to IUPUI to pursue a degree in management and marketing. Right now, I currently work for a fine dining restaurant and during the summer and breaks I work for Coach. I have just applied for an internship through my job at Coach as I am interested in working in the fashion industry. A dream of mine is to work in marketing for a fashion or beauty brand. I made it through the first round of decisions for the internship, so I am currently working on designs and a portfolio to submit for the internship application. My LindkedIN profile would benefit from: Undergrad student interested in management and marketing within the fashion industry. Well-versed in problem-solving, creativity, flexibility, teamwork, and a commitment to excellence. Experience in luxury retail and hospitality.

As I am still in my undergrad, I am targeting an internship. Listing my skills will help the employers know what I bring to the table. Mentioning my experience in luxury spaces will help attract the types of companies that I am looking to work with. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMelanie A Martin Melanie A Martin Jan 19, 2024Jan 19 at 3:16pm Hi, Clarice. I admire you for pursuing your dream. Regarding your profile header, mentioning that you're interested in management was a good move. It shows that you are future-oriented and ambitious. I think your intended audience would appreciate that you're good at problem- solving, trouble arises in every business venture. I suggest emphasizing and expounding upon your experience. Really "sell" yourself and show off what you've done! That could give you an edge with your audience over other potential interns. Respectfully, Melanie Martin Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionKimberly Adams Kimberly Adams Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 4:10pm Hello Clarice. I have seen lots of jobs in Marketing hear lately. Seems like a great profession to go in. You could even be the manager over a field of marketing at some places. Something I really like about your header was that you added lots of skills so the employer will know early on what they are getting themselves into. Due to you wanting to go into fashion and knowing how brandy fashion could be you might add something like an undergrad seeking a management internship role in a fashion based company. After that I would add something about why they should pick you and maybe arrange your skill that way. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMayra K Garcia-O'Connor Mayra K Garcia-O'Connor Jan 17, 2024Jan 17 at 9:31pm Hi all, I’m a single mother of two who just recently completed the technical certificate in business administration. I’m currently in the last year of my associates in business administration and plan to transfer to IUSB upon completion. There my plan is to complete my bachelor’s in business economics and urban development. Working as a community health worker has

aligned my interests with my passion to help individuals thrive. Through my work I sit on different boards of directors to non-profit organizations servicing our area. My hope is to open a facility dedicated to creating a community of servant leaders. My current LinkedIn profile has the following bio. A servant leader who strives to make this community a great place to live, work and play. My drive is the belief individuals can thrive in an inclusive community where diversity is cultivated and avenues for growth are created. I work to create spaces where people can connect to resources and feel encouraged to thrive. My target audience is other community partners who are also looking to build an inclusive community. My hope is to attract individuals seeking project/ program managers to be part of their team. I’ve also added my leadership roles in my profile to highlight my ability to lead diverse teams. My key terms are diversity, inclusion, thriving communities and project management. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJacob M Atkins Jacob M Atkins Jan 20, 2024Jan 20 at 12:52pm Hi Mayra I read that you plan to attend IUSB and I actually attended there for a semester! South Bend is my hometown. I think South Bend would be an amazing place to open a community facility. I think your profile header nails what you want to do. Perhaps you could add a why? Something that I always want to know about people in the non-profit space is what inspired you do that kind of work? Was it a person, an event? I think this will bring a level of personal connection that sets you apart from other non-profits. Reply Reply to Comment (1 like) Collapse SubdiscussionJosiah Miracle Josiah Miracle Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 2:52pm Hello class, My name is Josiah Miracle. I graduated in May of 2022 with an associate's degree in supply chain management and figured it would be enough to get an entry level job somewhere. Boy was I wrong. After graduating, I took some time off of school to look for a job, with no luck. I decided to come back to school here at Ivy Tech to pursue another associate's degree, this time in business administration. Following that, I plan on transferring into a four year program to finish out a bachelor's degree in supply chain management or business administration. Eventually, I would like to own my own business and lately I have been really interested in finance and/or sales.

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LinkedIn profile header: I am a hardworking and motivated business administration major, determined to expand my horizons and pursue new challenges. I am also well-versed in supply chain and logistics terminology that can transfer to any logistical setting. I have relevant leadership experience and look forward to gaining more. I have an interest in learning about the particular industries of finance and sales. The audience I am targeting with my profile header are leaders in industries such as supply chain/logistics, finance, and sales. Beyond that, I also look for professors of those fields who can offer me knowledge on those industries and how to improve my header as a whole. They will be looking for experience and willingness to gain more knowledge. I want anyone who reads my profile to know that I am a willing learner and that I have relevant experience in many different areas. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionCarrington Crutcher Carrington Crutcher Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 8:01pm Hi Josiah, I have to ask, what kind of business would you like to own and operate? Just keep going after it and you will land a role that will be perfect for you. I am studying business administration right along with you. Your LinkedIn header displays some very good details to gain employers attention. If I had to add something it would be to go into detail a little more about supply chain management and how what your role was handling the production of the good or service. I enjoyed your header and wish you the best of luck this semester as well as your future. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNancy Ellen Barnes Nancy Ellen Barnes Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 9:24pm Hello Josiah, I am currently studying Business Administration as well. I enjoyed reading your header it was very well written I would add some more information about the food supply chain industry and what you have learnt from it. I think it is great you are pursuing more education and pursuing your dream. I also like how you let the audience know your education background. Giving them insight into your capabilities is a great way to catch their attention. Good luck with the rest of your semester! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNatalie Renee Douthit

Natalie Renee Douthit Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 11:42pm Josiah, I'm sorry to hear that you did not find what you were looking for after graduation but it's great that you decided to go back to school and keep working towards you goal. That says great things about you. Owning your own business would be a great opportunity. I liked your header a lot, I think that possibly leaving out the "I have an interest in learning about the particular industries of finance and sales." and replacing it with "I am interested in finance and sales industry positions." would open your profile up to employers with more of a direct statement. I think you did a great job of demonstrating your strengths as well as experience. I like the thought of finding professors in the field as well. That is great opportunity for growth and expanding your knowledge. Have a great semester! Natalie Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMelanie A Martin Melanie A Martin Jan 19, 2024Jan 19 at 3:24pm Hello, Josiah. I am also studying business administration for the time being. Regarding your LinkedIn header, having "relevant leadership experience" should catch the eye of your intended audience. Also, your sentences are a good length and not unnecessarily wordy, in my opinion. I suggest focusing on one or two industries, though. Reading this leaves me wondering what your ideal job would be. That could help your audience determine if their organization is a good fit for you. Respectfully, Melanie Martin Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNancy Ellen Barnes Nancy Ellen Barnes Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 9:16pm Hello, My name is Nancy I am currently working towards my associate degree in business. I am pursuing a career in Business Management. I have experience in Management and really enjoy doing it and helping lead my teammates. What drives me career wise is a sense of passion, I

want to my make two daughters proud. I want to show them that no matter what obstacles you may face that with hard work and dedication you can do anything. My LinkedIn profile header would be the following: Experienced Assistant General Manager within the food industry, history is customer service, assisting employees with their needs, handling and managing money, SERV safe certified. Quickly and confidently handles customer service issues in proper manner. I am targeting individuals interested in hiring for a Food Industry Management position in which they are needing a qualified experienced person. I am willing to aim for higher management and eventually play a head management role. Delivering this Business with amazing customer service results. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJosiah Miracle Josiah Miracle Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 10:28pm Hello Nancy, Seeing that you replied to my post, I felt that I would reply to yours. Business management/administration is such a swiss army knife of degrees. It can be used for plenty of job opportunities. It's good that your family drives you. I am the same way, sometimes I feel that I can be too hard on myself for that same reason though. I need to be more careful sometimes. I liked reading your LinkedIn profile header. You did a good job at articulating your strengths and experiences that would lend themselves in the workforce. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionKimberly Adams Kimberly Adams Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 4:17pm Hello Nancy. Much like you I am also very passionate about my career and making my son proud. I like that you added where you currently are where you want to go and what you are doing about it. The only thing I feel like could use some change would be instead of assisting employees with their needs maybe change the wording to say coaching peers. Changing the wording to sound more experienced seems to make a difference sometimes. It looks like you have all the skills now you just need the lingo. From one mom to another good luck this semester. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMelanie A Martin Melanie A Martin Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 10:01pm

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Hello, I'm Melanie - a Christian, married, mother of three who loves musicals! Singing and acting are my passions and I hope to perform in musicals after graduation. I'm nearing completion of my associate degree in Business Administration then plan to transfer to the University of Southern Indiana for Accounting. Once that is finished, I'll take my CPA exam and hopefully move up in my company. My LinkedIn header could read: Experienced Accounting Specialist - knowledge of General Ledger balancing with proficiency in credit/debit card exceptions. Excellent teamwork with the ability to self-manage. Proven dependability and enthusiasm about assisting others. Since I'm very happy at my current employer, my intended audience is other accounting students and employees. We can network and share tips of the trade. They will likely be looking for my current school and accounting specialty to see what, if anything, we have in common. My target readers would likely expect to see concise, professional wording. I want them to understand that I love accounting and that I'm just a normal person breathing in and out every day. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJordan Drew Khoury Jordan Drew Khoury Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 2:17pm Hello Melanie, Nice to meet you! Your passion for musicals and your dedication as a Christian, married, and mother of three truly make you a multifaceted individual. It's impressive to see your love for singing and acting, and I hope you get to fulfill your dream of performing in musicals after completing your associate degree in Business Administration. It's wonderful to hear that you're content at your current employer and that you're looking to connect with other accounting students and professionals. Your target readers, likely fellow accountants, will appreciate the clarity and professionalism in your profile. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJenny Mitchell Jenny Mitchell Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 10:59pm Hello everyone. I'm currently enrolled in the B.O.A.T program. I'm unsure what is next for me. I worked in the same injection molding plant for 22 years before it suddenly closed. I have taken the opportunity to further my education and find a new path. I just knew, another factory was not what I wanted. There's not a thing wrong with that work. I just can't see myself lasting. I endured 2 surgeries on

the same foot and ankle the last 5 years I worked there and having a knee replacement on March 13th. I can see myself in a roll of customer service. I believe I have great people skills, no matter their walk of life. However, my passion is animals. I just don't know what I could do or how to get there. Full-Time Ivy Tech student, enrolled in B.O.A.T. I have 22-years' experience of organization, timely production, inventory keeping, product scheduling and safety. I will always have a commitment to my workplace and the people I encounter. Target would be anyone looking for someone that has had dedication toward a job. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionNatalie Renee Douthit Natalie Renee Douthit Jan 18, 2024Jan 18 at 11:32pm Hello, I'm Natalie. I am 21 and graduated high school in 2020. I am currently pursuing my degree in Business Administration. I plan to graduate with my associate's and get my bachelor's in Human Resources Management from Northern Kentucky University. I am motivated and driven by the idea of having a family one day. The thought of landing a good job and being able to afford moving out of Indiana and finding a new place to call home is a major motivator. I love traveling and being able to financially support my dreams of travelling around the world is really important to me. My LinkedIn header would be " Organized and detail oriented professional seeking to advocate for employee rights and labor laws. Driven by creating a positive employee experience. " When I looked online for ideas and examples, a lot sites said to highlight your goals and passions and I felt that this headline draws an employer to me as an HR professional by hitting important topics to me while also stating my strengths as an employee. i don't work in a professional setting currently but I would love feedback to change and/or add things in for post- graduation. My target audience would be future employers looking for entry-level HR employees that are passionate about their careers. I want those potential employers reading this to understand that I not only am passionate but I have goals for my time with them that center around employees and their company.

Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJenny Mitchell Jenny Mitchell Jan 20, 2024Jan 20 at 7:29pm Hello Natalie I enjoyed how precise you were in your layout and clear message. You conveyed everything that was asked very well. The only real criticism I have is the use of and. Some of your sentences seemed as if they were run-ons. Your vey last sentence needs fixed. I can tell you started saying it one way then chose another way of saying it. Best of luck in your endeavors! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJordan Drew Khoury Jordan Drew Khoury Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 2:13pm Hello Natalie, It's a pleasure to connect with you! Your dedication to pursuing a degree in Business Administration and your goal of specializing in Human Resources Management at Northern Kentucky University is truly commendable. The passion you have for your future family and the drive to secure a good job for a new chapter outside Indiana are inspiring. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMayra K Garcia-O'Connor Mayra K Garcia-O'Connor Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 11:56pm Hi Natalie, I believe you have a great header! You should included some soft skills such as interpersonal, communications and example of ways you create positive experiences. As a mom of two a family is a wonderful motivator for success. Good luck. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMelanie May Kirby Melanie May Kirby Jan 19, 2024Jan 19 at 12:03am Hi everyone,

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My name is Melanie and I'm currently working as an Instacart shopper full-time while I'm in school, until I can find a substantial remote job. As of this spring, I'll have my associate's degree from Ivy Tech. I would like to obtain my bachelor's degree from a four-year university and study abroad, most likely in international business with a minor in psychology. Right now I'm so busy with school, work, and hobbies that the only thing motivating me to wake up in the morning is coffee. However, since I was young it's been my dream to travel the world and be immersed in different cultures, learn how to cook local cuisine, meet new people, and learn new languages. I haven't figured out exactly what my long-term career goals are, but I know that I would like to open my own business and somehow help people. My goal in life is to save enough money to buy a piece of property, build my own home, and live off the land while helping others in any way possible along the way. Before I started working as an Instacart shopper, what started as a mural painting for my sister's (and her fiancee's) new grocery store turned into a full-time job. We learned she was pregnant right as they signed a lease, and what started with stocking shelves turned into buying and managing inventory, finding wholesalers, developing recipes (and cooking), creating relationships with customers, and more. My LinkedIn profile header would read, Business student seeking remote opportunities in international business, project management, or product development. Passionate for promoting sustainable, eco-friendly, and innovative companies. Managerial experience, Natural leader, Certified Yogi, Artist. My target audience would be potential employers or recruiters for the field of business. they might be looking for qualifications, achievements, education, and work experience. I think it's best to keep a professional yet personable tone and to stay concise. Your headline should summarize the person you are in the workplace. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJacob M Atkins Jacob M Atkins Jan 20, 2024Jan 20 at 12:41pm Hey Melanie, I'm right with ya on the traveling, that has been a goal of mine since forever. I like your profile header. I think you did a good job at relaying what exactly you're seeking even though you don't have a specific plan. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionKinley Marie Simonton Kinley Marie Simonton Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 1:11pm Hi Melanie!

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Your LinkedIn header is concise, yet you still managed to give a comprehensive overview of your skills and aspirations. The combination of "Certified Yogi" and "Artist" adds a unique and personal touch, making you stand out! Your profile aligns well with your target audience as is, however another sentence that highlights more of your skills/strengths would make your profile more attractive to potential employers! Best of luck with your future endeavors! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJacob M Atkins Jacob M Atkins Jan 20, 2024Jan 20 at 12:21pm Hello, I'm Jake. I am 22 years young and and I'm pursuing a degree in Business Administration. I have only one semester left which is pretty exciting, however I don't have a job or specific plan lined up after I graduate. I am a creative individual, which has always pushed me in the direction of entrepreneurship and the arts. One passion of mine is cooking which is currently my job as well. I think food has a weird way of connecting people and I love being able to make people good food. Comedy is my other passion and although I have always watched it, it wasn't until recently I started working on the preforming side. My future plans are to travel and keep growing my skills and knowledge. My LinkedIn header would be something along of the lines of: A creative, works better under pressure, flexible and adaptive. A good communicator with an ability to lead with competence or follow with diligence. Open minded but steadfast in values. I think in my personal situation with the little experience I actually have keeping it short and sweet is probably my best bet. Since I don't have any career accomplishments yet and I don't have much knowledge of any one industry, I figured highlighting what makes me stand out as an individual would be the best for employers to see. I would say the intended audience is another person or organization that has a meaningful project. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJenny Mitchell Jenny Mitchell Jan 20, 2024Jan 20 at 8:05pm Hello Jacob, The description of yourself is great. When I was a couple years younger than you are now (forever ago), I was in an interview and asked if I was a leader or a follower. I was young and stumped for a second. But I gave the most honest answer I could. I lead when I know where I'm

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going, I follow and learn when others know, and I don't. But when nobody knows I make sure we come together and figure it out. So, it's nice to see you are aware of being both a leader and a follower. I believe it's a great skill to have. I enjoyed the amount of information you shared. The main issue I saw was long sentences. They could have been broken up or just worded a little differently. Best of luck in whatever you choose to do! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionKinley Marie Simonton Kinley Marie Simonton Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 11:44am Hello Jake! Your passion for entrepreneurship, cooking, and comedy shines through in your post. Emphasizing creativity, adaptability, and effective communication on your LinkedIN profile by using professional language makes your header more appealing. Your unique blend of skills also makes you stand out- bravo! I would consider refining "works better under pressure" to highlight your ability to thrive in dynamic environments. I loved how short and to the point this header was, but maybe adding a brief sentence on your enthusiasm for business or arts could help narrow in on your target audience. Best of luck, Jake! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMayra K Garcia-O'Connor Mayra K Garcia-O'Connor Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 11:53pm Hi Jake! I love your view on how food connects people! I completely agree. I believe your LinkedIn header looks great but could be condensed. Perhaps change “works under pressure” to “thrives in fast-pace environments. Congratulations on this being your last semester! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionKinley Marie Simonton Kinley Marie Simonton Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 11:31am Hello class,

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My name is Kinley Simonton and I am a second year Ivy tech student. After this semester, I plan to obtain my associates in business administration and move on to a four year school to continue my education. My biggest driving force is my 1 year old son Walker. Everything I do is for him, he is everything good! I am passionate about homesteading and photography. Currently I have a little backyard chicken herd (40 counts as little right?) and I run my own photography business! In the future, I hope that my photography gig can earn me a full time salary and help me move my family onto a farm with a lot more land… and a lot more animals. My goal is to shoot 7 weddings next year! I consider myself to be a lifelong learner, but I’m currently pursuing a degree in Business Administration. I am a skilled restaurant manager with 7 years of experience in a quick service, high demand setting. My time in this field has made me a master communicator, a quick thinker, and a problem solver. My team always knows they can count on me to be ten toes down working right alongside them during challenging times, whether that be the Covid 19 pandemic or a hectic lunch rush. I have a passion for leadership development and always take the time to develop better leadership skills within my team. The target audience for my linked in profile would be colleagues and other professionals in the restaurant or retail industry. With my credentials as an experienced store manager, hiring managers and scouts will be drawn to my page when they are looking for someone to fill that role. My experience in a fast paced, high demand environment would be appealing as it confirms my ability to work and lead under immense amounts of pressure. My hope is that after interacting with my LinkedIn profile, I would be perceived as a capable manager that supports and motivates her team, all while driving store sales and building more leaders. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionDalton James Shad May Dalton James Shad May Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 2:05pm Hello! My name is Dalton May. I am working on earning my associates degree in business. I am currently employed at a diesel mechanic. I enjoy reading, playing video games, and practicing martial arts. Here is what my LinkedIn profile would look like: Hello! My name is Dalton May. I work as a diesel technician at Stoops Freightliner. I am currently enrolled at Ivy Tech as a business student, and I am also working on completing the training program at Stoops Freightliner. I have a good work ethic and I am goal orientated. The reader of my profile would largely be potential employers. They would be looking for career background. They would also be trying to get a understanding of the type of person I am. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionByron Martinez Nunez

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Byron Martinez Nunez Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 8:30pm Hello Dalton, I like how you mentioned your job experience as an employer can see this and know that you are a hard-working person because you have a job and are a student at the same time. Not just only that but you also hyped yourself up at the end of your header which is good as an employer can get a better understanding of the type of individual you are. One thing I would suggest for your header is to just maybe move your details about yourself to the beginning of your header as this is what the employer is going to be looking at. You want to catch the eye of a potential employer as a first impression means a lot in this day and age. I would also put more experience/education in the field you want to go into as these are the two things a potential employer will be browsing for when searching for a potential candidate. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionJordan Drew Khoury Jordan Drew Khoury Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 2:12pm Hey my name is Jordan Khoury, im 21 years old and currently pursuing a business major here at Ivy Tech. My passion lies in entrepreneurship, inspired by the footsteps of every male member in my family who owns their own business. This strong family legacy has been a significant motivator for me, shaping my career aspirations. Ultimately, I aim to start my own business in the future. My educational goals involve graduating from Ivy Tech and transferring to the Kelley School of Business to further hone my skills and knowledge in the field. I believe that through this journey, I can contribute meaningfully to the business world and carry on the entrepreneurial spirit within my family. Looking forward to connecting with classmates who share similar interests and goals! LinkedIn Header: "Aspiring Entrepreneur and Business Enthusiast | Ivy Tech Business Major | Driven by a Family Legacy of Success | Future Kelley School of Business Alumnus" Target Audience: My target audience on LinkedIn includes potential employers, industry professionals, and fellow business enthusiasts. I want those reading my profile to see a driven and passionate individual with a clear goal of pursuing entrepreneurship. Employers might be interested in my academic background and aspirations, while fellow business enthusiasts could find common ground in our shared passion for entrepreneurship. The language used in my profile is professional, highlighting my commitment to success and my family's legacy in business. I aim for readers to perceive me as a motivated and ambitious individual who is actively working towards contributing to the business world. Feel free to connect with me on LinkedIn: Jordan Khoury's LinkedIn ProfileLinks to an external site. Reply Reply to Comment (1 like) Collapse SubdiscussionMelanie May Kirby

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Melanie May Kirby Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 8:49pm Hi Jordan, You've done a great job with your LinkedIn header! It highlights your passion for entrepreneurship and your future goals. It would be even more engaging if you were to better define your family legacy of success, but ultimately it shows where your passion comes from. You could also add personal achievements or unique talents to showcase to potential employers. Reply Reply to Comment (1 like) Collapse SubdiscussionKimberly Adams Kimberly Adams Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 4:01pm Hello my name is Kim. Currently what drives me in my career would be my son and my future in teaching. Currently I know that we cant afford for me to teach so I am trying to make the most money that I can to pay things off so I can go back to school for teaching. My current degree will be business admin. I also have hopes that in the future this degree will help me become an assistant principal. Currently my paragraph on LinkedIn states, “Experienced and passionate manufacturing production trainer who has been promoted regularly due to my knowledge of the ins and outs of manufacturing. Along with my experiences, I've also gained a lot of passion for hitting targets and feeling successful while keeping quality at heart.” When I wrote this my intended audience was people in the manufacturing field or some sort of leadership role. The biggest thing I would want to show is that I care about my work and that I have gained a lot of knowledge very quickly and accurately. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionStacey L Beckner Stacey L Beckner Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 7:53pm Hi Kim! My son is also what drives me in my career. That is awesome you want to use your degree to become an assistant principal. I like that in your LinkedIN profile you stated "quality at heart". It shows that you care goals. Good luck with this semester and earning your degree! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionVictor Jose Torres Victor Jose Torres Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 7:11pm Hello, My name is Victor Torres. I have been attending Ivy Tech for 2 years and plan on transferring to Purdue Northwest at the end of my spring term here. I hope to get my Bachelor degree in

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Human Resources Management. My motivation for finishing college and starting my career is making money. Something that motivates me is finding things to work towards. An example of this is working toward buying a house in the future. Some time after college I hope to travel to many different places around the world. I have yet to leave the continent of North America. LinkedIn profile: Currently work as a Shift Manager at McDonald's in Winfield Indiana. Hard- worker that has management experience and has the ambition to continue. Hope to further my education and land a job in Human Resources. My LinkedIn profile is intended for potential employers to see if they are interested in hiring me. Potential employers would most likely looking for why I would be a good fit for a potential job. Such as what level of education I completed, where I've worked in the past, and potential references that I have. I hope people reading my profile will see that I have potential to work at their company. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionByron Martinez Nunez Byron Martinez Nunez Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 8:21pm Hello Victor, I like how you mentioned that something that motivates you is finding things to work towards. This is a great example of short-term goals, and it could indicate you have long- term goals as well. From an employer's point of view, this could show that you are a driven individual which is something an employer could be looking for in their next hire. Also, something especially good in your header includes your experience in management as a shift manager at McDonald's. Some suggestions I would make for your LinkedIn profile are to use more adjectives/keywords and to just hype yourself up because you want to brag about yourself but not too much to catch the eye of an employer. Including more details on your profile is key to finding that one career in human resources you are looking for. As well as just stating more experience and or education in the human resources field for your target audience. If you want to get a career in this field an employer is going to read your header and move on to the next if they don't see as many as another potential hire. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionStacey L Beckner Stacey L Beckner Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 7:44pm 1. Hello, my name is Stacey. What drives me in my career would be my son and my future as a Paramedic. Last year I completed the Paramedic program through Ivy Tech. I am currently taking the BOAT program to get my degree incase I have an opportunity in the future to become an EMS director. In the summer when my son is not in school we enjoy fishing and kayaking. I enjoy taking my camera to get pictures of the wildlife.

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2. My LinkedIN profile would be: Paramedic| Providing Compassionate Patient Care| 24 years experience| Well-versed in teamwork, quick decision making, problem solving, willing to learn, and ability to work under pressure. 3. My intended audience would be EMS directors. I hope my profile would so that I care about my career with 24 years of experience. Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionMelanie May Kirby Melanie May Kirby Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 9:17pm Hi Stacy, I also love kayaking! I went up to the boundary waters in the Canadian wilderness recently and got some gorgeous shots, but I was hoping to see a moose (I've never seen one). Your career choice is admirable and showcases who you are. Your LinkedIn header is good, but it could be worded better to showcase your amazing abilities and experience with life. It's good to show employers your talents and hobbies as well as your professional side so they can better see what kind of skills you have. An example could be, "Experienced and Passionate Paramedic Seeking EMS Director Position: Committed to Medical Services Leadership, Thrives in Challenging Situations, Nature Enthusiast", or something of the sort. I hope you achieve your goals! Reply Reply to Comment Collapse SubdiscussionByron Martinez Nunez Byron Martinez Nunez Jan 21, 2024Jan 21 at 8:12pm Hello, I'm Byron, and I'm currently enrolled in the general education program here at Ivy Tech. I'm getting an associate degree in general education and also a certificate in business administration. I plan to transfer over to a four-year school to study tourism and hospitality. A little bit about myself is that I am from Marietta Georgia, and I moved here to Indiana when I was 8 years old. I am passionate about volleyball, helping others, and being around my family and friends. Currently, I individually help people market things online as a little side business I reach out to family and friends who want to sell anything, and I market it for them to get a cut. Some things I have marketed include cars, shoes, technology, and vintage clothing. I used to resell a lot but not so much now more marketing. Some more cool things I want to do in the future could include starting my own real estate business, an online store, and owning multiple properties to hopefully be financially free with investments made early on. Silver Line real estate company also reached out to me so hopefully they can help me pursue the real estate field. Some of the

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things that motivate me include my family, my ambition to be better every day, and my number one supporter my mom. My LinkedIn header would be as follows: Motivated, hungry, and passionate business student experienced in the customer service/culinary field. Skills include but are not limited to multitasking, finding solutions, and managing a team whilst ensuring customer satisfaction. Five years of sales and marketing experience. 3 years of e-commerce experience and have made multiple connections with businesses. I will be writing to managers in the business/ tourism and hospitality field looking for a driven individual. I would want companies in these selected fields to read and "approve my LinkedIn profile. The content and information they will most likely be looking for are education and experience. The target audience might expect to see some achievements and or experience in the profile header. I want the people reading my profile header to know the type of person I am not just as another prospect but to stand out from the crowd. Reply Reply to Comment

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