Name Loreina De La Cruz
Course and Section Number PD202-7A
Date 2/23/2024
Unit 7 Resume Revisions Worksheet
Instructions:
You received feedback on your draft resume from your career coach and used the feedback to complete the final resume that is due with this assessment. The steps you took to revise the original draft should match the feedback you received.
List and describe three comments (feedback) you received on your resume draft from your career coach. Describe the changes you made and list the steps you took to address the feedback while completing your final resume.
1.
Feedback 1 Revise the resume content to minimize the use of overused words as musch as possible.
a.
Changes Decrease the use of common terms: ensure, completed/completing, and include.
b.
Steps Use synonyms for overused words.
2.
Feedback 2 Revise the bullet content to minimize the use of filler words as much as possible.
a.
Changes Rewrite simpler sentences.
b.
Steps Read the sentence out loud to make sure it makes sense and revise as needed.
3.
Feedback 3 Use strong action oriented words in the bullets that are not highlighted in green.
a.
Changes Use power verbs.
b.
Steps Add or replace words to strong action oriented words to describe the actions and outcomes I have achieved.
Once you have completed this worksheet (use the assignment rubric to ensure it is complete), submit it to the assignment area.
