2.05 Final Draft Assessment Finished 2
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2.05 Final Draft Assessment - “The Lady or The Tiger” Sequel
All of your hard work will now be completed when you turn in your final draft!
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You have read the short story, “The Lady or The Tiger?”.
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You have planned out your sequel in the 2.01 prewrite.
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You have written the first draft to the sequel based on your 2.01 prewrite ideas for 2.03.
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You talked about the module 2 lessons and your writing in the 2.04 DBA and now you get to turn in your
completed work!
Step 1: Complete the steps below to submit your final draft.
Paste your final draft of your story below.
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LABEL OR COLORMARK the Exposition, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, Resolution.
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What two plot techniques did you use?
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1. Plot Technique 1: Flashback
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2. Plot Technique 2:
Deus ex machina
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LABEL OR COLORMARK the Plot Techniques.
“How did I get here”? says the man. He stood in a room wondering if he would walk out with the love of
his life or be eaten alive by a tiger. The man trusted the princess that she would point to the door with his
lover so without the slightest hesitation, a man opened the door to the right, causing everyone to feel their
heartbeat stop. A roar startled the man, who saw the furious tiger lurking behind the door. The man looked
at the princess in disbelief “how could you do this”? He remembered looking at the princess in a crowd of
worried faces and she sat alone, looking whiter and paler. Her lover, with the ability to sense her soul,
recognized her as the one behind the lady and the tiger.The princess could not say anything, she felt like
she had no other choice so she watched in fear as the tiger devoured the man she loved, shocked that
she would betray him. The princess regretted her choice and would do anything to take her choice back
and talk to him again. The king was amazed but relieved, as he had never desired this. The damsel hiding
behind the other door was confused and angry, feeling deceived. She had discussed with the man which
door she would be in before the trial, and no one had any knowledge of it. The damsel consoled the man
by stating that he would keep that in mind. The damsel began accusing the princess of being to blame for
the events that had occurred. She screamed, "You are the reason he is dead!" The lover replied that he
felt deceived and let down by the princess's choice to end his life rather than let him fall in love with
someone else. The princess saw the pain she was causing everyone and quickly realized that her choice
was wrong. She ran to his dead body and collapsed while holding him.
After the lover was buried, the
princess reflected on how her blind love and jealousy had cost her lover's life. Even though she knew she
was jealous of the woman, she realized that she loved the man and that her decision was incorrect.
Step 2: Complete the reflection activity with details about your understanding and implementation of
the revision and editing process.
Answer each question with a minimum of 2-3 sentences each.
Explain the steps you took
to revise your first draft. Be
I made sure to revisit my first draft and add more details as I was writing. I
decided to keep my finale draft shorter but packed with action and
sure to address the addition
of imagery, literary devices,
figurative language, and
word choice.
everything needed. I made sure to use imagery to describe what the
princess looked like in the moment of choosing what door to choose for her
lover and I used figurative language and word choice when writing the
characters' emotions after the lover/man died.
Describe the steps you took
to edit your narrative. Be
sure to address how you
checked for grammar,
subject-verb agreement,
punctuation, and spelling.
The story was edited by looking for run-on sentences, adding additional
details when necessary, making sure I used commas or semicolons, and
making sure all spellings were correct. After I finished writing my final draft,
I looked over it and made sure everything was correct and fixed the
mistakes.
Summarize three things you
learned during this process
that resonated with you.
1.
Imagery is important in stories
2.
Word choice is very important
3.
Editing and revising is essential to a story
On Target
Almost There
Needs Improvement
Final Draft
(80 points)
80-66 points
The story is a sequel to the
short story "The Lady and
the Tiger."
The story successfully
includes all five elements of
the plot structure.
The story successfully
incorporates at least two
narrative elements.
65-51 points
The story is somewhat of a
sequel to the short story
"The Lady and the Tiger."
The story includes four
elements of the plot
structure.
The story successfully
incorporates one narrative
element.
50-0 points
The story is off topic and
does not follow "The Lady
and the Tiger."
The story includes three or
fewer elements of the plot
structure.
The does not include any
narrative elements.
Reflection
(15 points)
15- 12 points
The reflection is fully
answered with excellent
attention to detail about the
revision and editing process.
11-9 points
The reflection is answered
with some attention to detail
about the revision and
editing process.
8-0 points
The reflection is answered
with cursory details about
the revision and editing
process.
Grammar,
Usage, and
Mechanics
(5 points)
5-4 points
There are virtually no
spelling, punctuation, or
grammatical errors.
3-2 points
There are a few spelling,
punctuation, or grammatical
errors.
1-0 points
There are several spelling,
punctuation, or grammatical
errors.
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